suNo keoN deed ka deedaar se rishta s'daa thehra

Koyal · July 15, 2005, 4:37am

***wafa k rahro ko keoN s’daa barbaad dekha hai ***
kaha toofaa’N maiN ghir kar koi aa’baad dekha hia

nahiN naata agar koi tu keon sapnay maiN aa’ey they
jawab aya nahi tha maiN mera hum-zaad dekha hai

suo kesay mohabat per huwa imaaN phir qaa’em
bata’ya aik pather ko bohat nashaa dekha hia

zamnay maiN koi dekha jis ne dil ki na maa’ni
kaha hai theek hia muj ko nahi hia yaad dekha hia

suno keoN deed ka deedaar se rishta sada thehra
kaha khushboo ko phooloN se kabhi azaad dekha hai

chand_chehra · July 15, 2005, 4:57am

Re: suNo keoN deed ka deedaar se rishta s’daa thehra

very nice ghazal :k:

lakin itni spaceeee kyu

harf-e-junoon · July 15, 2005, 7:12am

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yeah its nice , jeha tuk deed ka taaluq hay aik qutta paish-e-khidmut hay

na deed hay na sukkhun, ub na hurf hay na payaaam
koi bhi heela-e-tuskeen nahi , pur aas buhat hay
umeed-e-yaar, nazar ka mijaaz, durd ka rung
tum aaj kuch bhi na poocho kay dil udaas buhat hay

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 15, 2005, 9:30am

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Beautiful!

Koyal · July 15, 2005, 12:01pm

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pata nahi chando g itni mushkil se post ki hai kabhi terhi ho jati kabhi kuch ho mod kahan hain post karnay k tareeqay b batiey:(

SunnyBoy · July 15, 2005, 2:28pm

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nice

Aryaan · July 15, 2005, 4:25pm

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very nice** Koyal**.....:)

ullujii · July 15, 2005, 5:29pm

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kaha khushboo ko phooloN se kabhi azaad dekha hai awesome

ps: ab na kehna keh poetry main ab ullu bolin gay

system · July 17, 2005, 1:29am

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Very nice Koyal... :-)

Golden_Scorpion_1 · July 17, 2005, 6:31am

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KOYAL…

shoaib_akhter · July 17, 2005, 6:58am

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bohat nice

ullujii · July 17, 2005, 7:09pm

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kithay nass gye koyal :halo:

Koyal · July 19, 2005, 10:45pm

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thanks harf:)

Koyal · July 20, 2005, 12:23am

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thanks heartu:)

show_sha · July 23, 2005, 12:40am

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nice! lagta hay aaj kal makalmati shairi say shghaf farma rahee hain koyal ji…but very nice:k:

Amal · July 24, 2005, 2:30pm

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Very nice ghazal Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing with us

muddii · July 25, 2005, 3:27am

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Oowii Allah…inni achi poem…

Buhat Khub…Lagata Hia Seedhi Dil Say Likhii.

Koyal · July 26, 2005, 2:42am

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REally:) ..thanks

Koyal · July 26, 2005, 2:43am

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thanks… aur lagta hia ye gazal waiqe ap k dil ko lagi

Koyal · July 26, 2005, 2:46am

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thanks sunny

PS: ap ki site kesi chal rehi:)