~*~Suno Janan~*~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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~Suno Janan~
****Kaha Tha Na **
**Mujhe Tum Is Tarha Sotey Hovey Mut Chorr Ker Jana **
**Mujhe Be-Shak Jaga Dena **
**Bata Dena **
**Mohabbat Ke Safar Mein Saath Merey Chal Nahi Saktey **
**Judaii Ke Safar Mein Saath Merey Chal Nahi Saktey **
**Tumhein Rasta Badalna Hai **
**Meri Hud Sey Nikalna Hai **
**Tumhein Kis Baat Ka Darr Tha? **
**Tumhein Janay Nahi Deti? **
**Kahein Per Qaid Kar Leti? **
Suno Janan
**Mohabbat Ki Tabiyat Mein Zabardasti Nahi Hoti **
**Jisay Rasta Badalna Ho Usay Rasta Badalney Se **
**Jisay Hud Se Nikalna Ho Usay Hud Se Nikalney Se **
**Na Koi Rok Paya Hai **
**Na Koi Rok Paye Ga **
**Tumhein Kis Baat Ka Darr Tha? **
**Mujhe Be-Shak Jaga Detey **
**Main Tum Ko Dekh Hi Leti **
Tumhein Koi Douaa Deti
SUNO JANAN,
**Tumharay Baad KHONAY Ke Liye, **
**Ab Kuch NAHI Baaqi **
Magar,
Khonay Se Darti Hoon **
Main Ab Sonay Se Darti Hoon

***:flower2:BySama:flower2: ****

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Bohat khoob** Samavia**…:k:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Thank U Aryaan jee,
I am new in this forum and I need Sport of all my Seniors.
With lots of thanks and prayers.:flower1:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Welcome to GupShup Samavia... hum sabki duayein aapke sath hain...:)

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Bohat khoob

Khush rahoo

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

WOW… Outstanding… Buhut Rawani se Likhi Gayi hay Ye Nazam… Very Nice :flower1:

Welcome to GS… I am sure you will have good time here.. and We have Very good and caring Guppies here.

As I can see… BY SAMA at end… It meanz… This is Your own Poem, So now its in its Right place … Shura-e-GS

Hope To Read more from you :slight_smile:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Sallam 2 All,

Thanks Soooo Much ARAAYAN DILSEY GOLDEN SCORPIO***. 4 appreciating me. :salute:

U know When I saw that my post is not in INTEKHAAB my heart stop beating :bash: 4 a while that Is my Poetry is this much bad that u delete it? But then:) …Thanks Alot. :flower2:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

You are most welcome... :)

We are not that Bad ppl to Delete someon's Poems :D

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Aap buhat umda likhtee hain. Likhtey raha keejiye.

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

wah… so touchy :flower1: welcome to GS and have fun :slight_smile:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Hamain aap nay gulabi koyoon kar diya hum main tu glooboon wali koyee baat nahi… haan pasand zaroorn hain…

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Sallam,
well kuch sooch ker tu gulaabi nahi kiya tha lakin ab aap ne ehsaas dilaya tu yaad aaya ke vaqi galti ho gai aap ka tu RED se likhna chahiye tha na:) coz DILSEY tu khoon hi tapakta hai na jiska rung red hota hai some time white bhi hota hai lakin POETS ka khoon kabhi white nahi ho sakta na.:flower2:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Bohut Shukriya NAZI83…CAPRICORN…G_S.
Doaaon Mein Yaad Rakhiye Ga. Or Yonhi MUHABBETEIN Baant-Tey Rahiye. :hug:

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Aab khoon raha kahan hai ka rang ka soochain…

Pahlay nas nas khoon nechoora us nay
Phir ya kahtay hain ka rangat he mari peeli hai

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Hah ha :teary3:
Ae Muhabbat Teri Dohaai Hai. :frusty:

I took these pics few days before
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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Mohabat ko ilzam na dain... dweer say sar takranay say kuch nahi hoo ga...

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

JO Hokum. Lakin Phir Kisko Ilzaam Dein?????

Kis Pe Ilzaam Makeeno Ne Lagaaye Hon Ge
Ghar Hi Jab Ghar Ke Chiraagin Ne Jalaaye Hon Ge

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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

If my memory is not playing me foul, I guess it has already appeared on GS - a long time back. And to be honest Sama, I find difficult to belive it’s by you. I mean it’s just too good. And if it’s really your own creation, than let us welcome the best poet ever joining the GS :flower1: Hope we will have lots more from your pen :slight_smile:

Glam My Icecream
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Re: ~~Suno Janan~~

Thanks AMAL…like kernay ke liye…I never put its ever b4 might be some of my net friend did it. i cant say.
anyways thanks once again and Bye 4EVER:teary3:
ALVIDA