Suno Janaan..

Aik Nazm,

Suno Janaan
Main Tum Se Ye
Kahoon Kese
Ke Tum Bin Main
Adhoora Hoon..!

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Re: Suno Janaan..

Beautiful red apni he hia na :stuck_out_tongue: (jus kidin) aj kal tu mazak kartey hweuy b daR sa lagta kab koi kis waqat poetry form choR jaa’ey :bummer:

Re: Suno Janaan..

thnx ji.. wese main itnay araam se GS nahi chhornay wala :blush:

Re: Suno Janaan..

v nice

Re: Suno Janaan..

thnx alot DS jee :$

Re: Suno Janaan..

**Red ID,
**yeh nazam to shuro hotay h ikhatam hogai :s
Kuch khainch taan kar lamba karlaitay na :-D

waisay janaaN say sawaalat nai kartay, bas keh daitay hain apnay kaan band kar kay...

Madam Madonna Says: Express yourself ;-)

achi short nazam hay waisay :-)

Re: Suno Janaan..

Itni bari baat itnay piyar say kah dee kiya baat hai khush rahoo

Re: Suno Janaan..

thn alot Dilsay :)

Re: Suno Janaan..

thank you jee.. :blush: