'Suna Hai'

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Suna hai baam falak say utar kar daykhtay hain
Suna hai din ko usay titliyan satati satati hain
Suna hai raat ko jugnoo teher kar daykhtay hain
Suna hai hashar hain uski ghazaal si ankhen
Suna hai unko hiran dasht bhar kar daykhtay hain
Suna hai uski siyah chasmigi qayamat hai
So usko surma-farosh aah bhar kar daykhtay hain
Suna hai uskay labon say gulab jaltay hain
So ham bahaar par ilzaam dhar kay daykhtay hain
Suna hai jab say hamayal hain uski gardan may
Mizaj aur hi lal-o-gohar kay daykhtay hain
Suna hai uskay badan ki tarash aisi hai
Kay phool apni qabahen katar kay daykhtay hain
Bas ik nigah say kat-ta hai qafla dil ka
So reher-wan tammana bhi dar kay daykhtay hain
Rukay to gardishen uska tawaaf kartin hain
Chalay to is ko zamana teher kay daykhtay hain~~~
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wah:k:

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Very nice and welcome....

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nice

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Sahiba ko atay jatay hum daikhtay hain
Hum doc ko gupshup par welcome kartay hain

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Re: 'Suna Hai'

Welcome Dr Sahiba.....
it was a good selection and thanks for sahring it
this is from Ahmed Faraz......
but I think you need to re-look into it
I think the start of this ghazal is not the one that you started off with
Please excuse me if I am wrong....ok
Thanks

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Re: 'Suna Hai'

I think you have entirely changed the wordings and style of this beaautiful ghazal by Ahmed Faraz.....so,
let be bare you out correctly..

Suna hai loog usse aankh bhar ke dekhtay hain...so uss ke shehar main kuch din thehar ke dekhtay hain

Suna hai dard ke dahak hai chashm-e-naz usski...so hum bhi usski gali se guzar ke dekhtay hain

Suna hai ussko bhi shair-o-shaeri se hai shughaf...yeh hai tu chalo baat kerke dekhtay hain

Suna hai din ko titliyan usse satati hain....suna hai raat ko jugno thehar ke dekhtay hain..

Abb usske shehar main thehrain ke kooch karain... Faraz aao sitaray safar ke dekhtay hain

well, its a bit lengthy ghazal, I however have written a few ishaars for your reference please...

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Re: Re: 'Suna Hai'

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
I think you have entirely changed the wordings and style of this beaautiful ghazal by Ahmed Faraz.....so,
let be bare you out correctly..

Suna hai loog usse aankh bhar ke dekhtay hain...so uss ke shehar main kuch din thehar ke dekhtay hain

Suna hai dard ke dahak hai chashm-e-naz usski...so hum bhi usski gali se guzar ke dekhtay hain

Suna hai ussko bhi shair-o-shaeri se hai shughaf...yeh hai tu chalo baat kerke dekhtay hain

Suna hai din ko titliyan usse satati hain....suna hai raat ko jugno thehar ke dekhtay hain..

Abb usske shehar main thehrain ke kooch karain... Faraz aao sitaray safar ke dekhtay hain

well, its a bit lengthy ghazal, I however have written a few ishaars for your reference please...
[/QUOTE]
I agree with Man de Mouj...this is the acctual Ghazal...

anyways...
Welcome to GS :)
Enjoy your stay here

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Welcome aboard Dr. Sahiba:flower1::slight_smile:

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Thanks for liking the piece.

It was not my intention to twist the words of Faraz Sahab. I read this piece somewhere, found it attractive, and decided to post.

Thanks again for the welcome.

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buhat khub and welcome

suna hay rubt hay usay buray hall logoan say
so apnay aap ko burbaad ker kay daikhtay hain

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zabardast :k::k:

PS: welcome 2 gs, :slight_smile: