Ek hunar hai jo kar gaya hoon main,
Sab ke dil se utar gayaa hoon main,
Kaise apni hansi ko zabt karun,
Sun raha hoon ke ghar gaya hoon main,
Kya bataun ke mar nahi paata,
Jeete jee sab se mar gaya hoon main,
Ab hai bas apna saamna darpesh,
Har kisise guzar gaya hoon main,
Wo hi naaz-o-ada, wo hi gamze,
Sar-ba-sar aap par gaya hoon main,
Ajab Ilzaam hoon zamaane ka,
Ke yahan sab ke sar gaya hoon main,
Kabhi khud tak pahuch nahi paaya,
Jab ke vaan umr bhar gaya hoon main,
Tumse janaan mila hoon jis din se,
Be-tarah,khud se dar gaya hoon main,
Koo-e-jaanaan mein sog barpaa hai,
Ke achanak, sudhar gaya hoon main
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Nice Sharing.....
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Achanak sudhar gaye 
kisi hadse ka side effect hoga
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chalo achi baat hai.
Re: Sudhar gaya hoon main
shayiry main ‘achanak’ bhi kai salon pe muheet hota hai
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Word ka ghalat isstemal 
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shayiry main words ista’aray k taur pe bhi use keay jatay hain
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Isti'ary ka mutlub ?
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kisi lafz ka majazi meaning:(
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Metaphor?
jiia
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sudherne ka to sawal hi peda nahi hota
misal ghalat hi de nahi sakti:barbie:
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Kya bataun ke mar nahi paata,
Jeete jee sab se mar gaya hoon main,
Ana ke mare log
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Metaphor?
Yes.
Gulaab hath main aankh main sitara ho
Koi wajood to muhabbat ka ista'aara ho
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sur ke uper se gaya 
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Parveen Shakir ke liye muhabbat ka wajood aisa tha jaise gulab hath main rakh kar aankh main sitaron ko qid kar lia jae.. wohi aap wala metaphor
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Re: Sudhar gaya hoon main
oh i get it now..shayad jahan word isti’ara aa jaaye wahan se meri samajh khatam ho jati hai