Subz Madham Roshni Main Surkh Aanchal Key Dhanak

Sannan · August 8, 2006, 2:47am

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Thx prince

Sad Effect : Its very kind of you that u like my work
Rabia G romantic to yah nazam hay he .... anyway thx for ur nice comments

Impressionist · August 8, 2006, 2:48am

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wow--------------------wht a background

Sannan · August 8, 2006, 4:11am

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Vooooooo ...... what a comment

Muslim_girl_1 · August 9, 2006, 8:48pm

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^^

tahreem_saeed · August 11, 2006, 5:15am

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beautiful

pehloo pey meri zoolf ko pehlao kisi din
har roz garajatey ho baras jao kisi din
mein apni har ek saans us raat ko de doon
sar rakh kar meray seeney pey so jao kisi din

kaleemhk · August 11, 2006, 5:37am

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This is my favorite ................ very nice ............ so thanks

Sannan · August 11, 2006, 6:16am

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Thanks Tahreem G for sharing such a cool asha'r .....

kaleemhk · August 12, 2006, 6:03am

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Correction Required:

Cheyh'rey Pey Maray Zulf Ko Phelaoo Kisii Din
Kia Roz Garajtey Ho Berass Jaa'o Kisii Din

Razo'n Ki Tarhan utro Meray Dill Main Kisii Shab
Dastak Pey Maray Hath Ki Khul Jaoo Kisii Din

Pe'Don Ki Tarhan Hussn Ki Barish Main Naha-lo'n
Badal Ki Tarhan Jhoom K Ghar Aa'o Kisii Din

Khushboo Ki Tarhan Guzroo Maray Dill Ki Galii Say
Phoolo'n Ki Tarhan Mujh Pey Bikhar Jaoo Kisii Din

Phir Hath Ki Kherat Milay Band Qaba Ko
Phir Lutf-e-shabo-wasal Ko Dohraoo Kisii Din

*Guzrein Jo Meray Ghar Say To Ruk Ja'ain Sitaray *
*Iss Tarhan Merii Raat Ko Chamkaoo Kisii Din *

Main Apnii Har Ik Sanss Issi Ko Day Du'n
Sar Rakh Key Meray Seenay Pey So Jaoo Kisii Din

sad_affect · August 13, 2006, 6:48pm

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Very Nice Kaleemhk
Still Correction Required:

Cheyh'rey Pey Maray Zulf Ko Phelaoo Kisii Din
Kia Roz Garajtey Ho Berass Jaa'o Kisii Din

Razo'n Ki Tarhan utro Meray Dill Main Kisii Shab
Dastak Pey Maray Hath Ki Khul Jaoo Kisii Din

Pe'Don Ki Tarhan Hussn Ki Barish Main Naha-lo'n
Badal Ki Tarhan Jhoom K Ghir Aa'o Kisii Din

Khushboo Ki Tarhan Guzroo Maray Dill Ki Galii Say
Phoolo'n Ki Tarhan Mujh Pey Bikhar Jaoo Kisii Din

Phir Hath Ko Kherat Milay Band Qaba Ki
Phir Lutf-e-shab-e-wasal Ko Dohraoo Kisii Din

*Guzrein Jo Meray Ghar Say To Ruk Ja'ain Sitaray *
*Iss Tarhan Merii Raat Ko Chamkaoo Kisii Din *

Main Apnii Har Ik Sanss ussi raat Ko Day Du'n
Sar Rakh Key Meray Seenay Pey So Jaoo Kisii Din

Amal · August 13, 2006, 11:17pm

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Wohi to, romantic to hey, lekin shaed kuch ziaada hi

goodnews · August 14, 2006, 1:16am

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Muhtram Amal {TheMD}Mehsoos hota hy KleemH ka intikhab
~~ MAAN JATI ~~**
Ap ki nazron sy nahi guzri Zra apni maherana ray dijiy ky woh Romantic hy ya romantic sy do char hath agy kuch:clown: or I bet ap ko 2;) or more winkies ki zaroorat ho gi.

Sannan · August 16, 2006, 3:06am

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Hey This Nazam is Romantic and that one """maan jati " is kinda loofrana .......heheheheh

goodnews · August 16, 2006, 3:58am

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hahahahah SAN! zabrdast Tabsra" L0OFRANA" yes it is kinda nahi bhrpor tor pr Lofrana hy La shak fi zalik, Mery dimagh main yeh lafz nahi arha tha . Amal shaid apny UHDY ki wajah sy istymal nahi kr sakty thy magar woh khty hain na
Laby khamosh ki khatir hi woh lab kholta hy
Jab nahi bolta bnda tu khuda bolta hy
Allah ny tumhari zban sy yeh lafz niklwa kr Amal ki mushkil hal kr di:D Is sy lajwab tabsr annahi ho skta.Shukriya
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*Note: Han colleg ky din nahi "Colleg ki chutin" kha tha main ny.;) Nazar Andaz kr gay hahahaha kuch nazm yah ghazal ho jay ky Girls College ky chakr katny pr kitni bar Chowkidar sy or Larki ky munh boly (larki ko bhi nahi pt ahot akhan sy pyda ho gay)Bhaion sy pity.Kuch ho jay dard angyz.Audio Gallery ky Jinhy mera piya kutiya ki trz pr kuch:D *

Sannan · August 16, 2006, 4:31am

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oh hoye ...... yaad aa gia buhat kuch leekan woh mazahia she'ri main aata hay ..... but i'll try to send one on intikhab .....