SUB KUCH GANWA DIA.................

SJ · March 25, 2007, 11:28am

Lafzoon ke justuju mani sub kuch ganwa dia
woh chal dia main tarz-e-ada dhoondta raha

Us ko kisi nay “Rab” say lia maang aur main
Sajday main gir kay harf-e-dua dhoondta raha

abeeha · March 25, 2007, 1:09pm

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its good but rythm nahi hai:)

aabla_pa · March 25, 2007, 2:17pm

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Its Really Nice. :k:
or is mein rythm b hai.

SJ · March 25, 2007, 2:56pm

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it is in rythm abeeha......:)

nakhan · March 25, 2007, 7:17pm

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Beautiful...

very nice sharing soniaa

mr.muncho · March 25, 2007, 10:20pm

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kiya bayaan shaer apni haalut e zaar ka
kisee ney daad di koi ryhthm dhondtaa raha

being_lonely · March 26, 2007, 12:43am

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Umdaa :k:

Jawaabi Karwaaii :

Tere Naam Ki Thi Jo Roshni Usay Khud He To Bujha Diya
Na Jala Saki Jisay Dhoop Usay Chandni Ne Jala Diya
Main Hoon Gardishon Main Ghira Hua Mujhe Aap Apni Khabar Nahi
Wo Shakhs Tha Mera Rahnuma Usay Rastoon Main Ganwa Diya

Yeh Ghazal Meri Bohat Pasandeeda Hai InshALLAH jald post karong apke dhaagay mein puri ghazal no way

beINg loNely!!! sId !!!

hiba_no.1 · March 26, 2007, 7:37am

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bohat khoob

muddii · March 26, 2007, 9:41am

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Aaaaaaaaawwww splended splended choice...............:)

moonmine · March 27, 2007, 8:51am

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zabardast!

alirafaqat · March 27, 2007, 10:37am

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wh
dil ki bat likhi hay