Strictily Rhymes

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:40am

<— for all those who talk without rhyming

Thread meine khola hai, shair aap likhen
Kaisa mera kamaal hai…ye bhi aap dekhen

(I’m lame )

My opponent: HHL open challenge to u man

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:43am

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Shair to kya, hum to aap ke baarey mein poori ghazal likh jaaye
Itni tareef kaafi hai ya koi do chaar jhoot aur keh jaaye :p

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:44am

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I knew ud show up :D

ghazal choriye aap kiun takleef kartay hain
jhoot bolnay se apni taqdeer likhtay hain :o

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:46am

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Takleef nahi bas waise hi keh raha tha
Iss thread mein aane se pehla main doosri mein jaa raha tha

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:48am

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doosri mein jaiye ya is mein ayyi'ye
har jaga se jootay hi khaiyye :D

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:49am

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Jootey ke naam se humein mat daraiyye
Zara kaam ke ache ache shair likhte jaiyye :)

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:50am

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shaer tao saaray hi kaam ke hotay hain
jin ko likhnay na ayen woh khotay hain :D:D:D:D

Khumar · October 31, 2006, 12:53am

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blink blink blink oh my. this is interesting. drags a huge arm chair, brings out some :desimunda: and popcorn

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:53am

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Ab aisi baatein bhi naa kareN ke jinn se doosre rooth jaaye
Yeh na ho ke aisi tareefeiN sunn ke andar se toot jaaye

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:53am

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andar se tootain tao toot jayen,
ye na ho ke mera thread close karwa jayen

AQ · October 31, 2006, 12:55am

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Jo bakraY naa maaraa hai bakri ko seeNg
tau bhaee, ab bakri bhee maaraaY gee bakraY ko seeNg

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:55am

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yeh to thread kholne se pehla sochna tha
Iss thread ki baat ko zara pehle tolna tha

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 12:56am

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Umer Shariff’s stage show

hai na?

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 12:58am

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bakra bakri seeng martay rahenge
ham apni thread ko bhi toltay rahenge

Umer sharif stage show mein boltay rahenge
hamaray guppy bhi sher boltay rahenge

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 1:01am

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Bakra bakri to bachpan se saath hain
Unn ko aap seeng maarne hi deiN

Umer shariff ke stage show ko chodeiN
Aap humare Shairzz pe tawajjo deiN

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 1:02am

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tawajjo dene qaabil hon tao tawajjo dun
agar lafz nahi miltay tao kaho mein dhoond dun

AQ · October 31, 2006, 1:03am

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Dil ka dard opper saY kaheeN nazar aataa hai
Dil ka dard ooper saY naheeN nazar aataa hai

Hum_Hain_Lajawab · October 31, 2006, 1:04am

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@ bulbul:

Ajee janab, humaare paas alfaaz hi alfaaz hain to kyoo karoo fikar
Ab yeh bhi mat kehna ke humaare alfaaz khatam ho gaye, mat karna aisa zikar

BulBuli · October 31, 2006, 1:05am

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that dont rhyme

lafz tao hongay hi boht hotay hain
unko laganay mein asal baat hai

AQ · October 31, 2006, 1:08am

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Cham Cham Cham Cham!
Cham Cham Cham Cham!