:::Soudaa Gar :::

Gadha · September 11, 2002, 6:04am

Soudaa Garr – Ahmad Faraz (Pass Andaaz Mosam)

Ghuroor-e-jaan ko meray yaar bech detay hain
qubaa kee hirss main dastaar bech detay hain

yeh loug kiyaa hain kay dou chaar khuahishoun kay liyeh
tamaaam umer kaaa pindaaar bech detay hain

Junoon-e-zeenat-O-Aaraaish-e-makaan kay liyeh
kaie makeen dar-O-deewaar bech detay hain

zaraa bhii narkh ho baalaa tau taajiraan-e-haram
kaleem-O-jubba-O-dastaar bech detay hain

buss itna farq hay Yousuf main aur mujh main Faraz
kay uss ko gher, mujhay yaar bech detay hain

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 11, 2002, 6:06am

yeh loug kiyaa hain kay dou chaar khuahishoun kay liyeh*
tamaaam umer kaaa pindaaar bech detay hain*

Like It , Thanks for sharing :~)

nikii · September 11, 2002, 6:36am

bhut khoob :k:

hanie · September 11, 2002, 6:45am

yeh loug kiyaa hain kay dou chaar khuahishoun kay liyeh
tamaaam umer kaaa pindaaar bech detay hain

wah… bohat khoob… :k:

Gadha · September 11, 2002, 7:49pm

Gul , nikii and hanie thanks:)

_Passionate · September 13, 2002, 2:04am

lovely:k:

i have the book and i like this poem alot:)

system · September 13, 2002, 10:40am

Beautiful :k: :k:

Dur-e-Suman · September 13, 2002, 7:17pm

this is my fav ghazalll..specially last sher..keep it up

Dania · September 13, 2002, 7:37pm

zabar10 :k:

SunnyBoy · September 13, 2002, 8:09pm

Buhat Khoob :k:

Rameesha · September 15, 2002, 12:04am

Re: :::Soudaa Gar :::

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Gadha: *

** ]yeh loug kiyaa hain kay dou chaar khuahishoun kay liyeh**
tamaaam umer kaaa pindaaar bech detay hain

buss itna farq hay Yousuf main aur mujh main Faraz
kay uss ko gher, mujhay yaar bech detay hain
[/QUOTE]

buhat aala Ghada bhai ....... thanks for sharing & welcome to poetry :)