sono to sahi ...........

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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meri zubaan se meri, daastaan suno to sahi ..
yaqeen karo na karo, meherbaan suno to sahi ..

chalo ye maan liya, mujrim-e-mohabbat hain ..
hamaare jurm ka hamase, bayaan suno to sahi ..

banoge dost mere tum bhi, dushmanon ek din ..
meri hayaat ki aah-o-fugaan, suno to sahi ..

laboon ko see ke jo bethe hain, bazm-e-duniya main ..
kabhi tou unki bhi, Khamoshiyaan suno to sahi ..

kahoge waqt ko mujrim, bhari bahaaroon main ..
jala tha kaise mera, aashiyaan suno to sahi ..

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Sudarshan Faakir

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

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abhi kuch aur sunanay ko baqie hai kia

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itna kuch tu …

any way V nice

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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2nd last shair is so nice

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thankz for sharing

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwn awwwwwwwn jano ap yaha hain
to msn par kyu nahi

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kya apne mujhay …

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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abhi suna hee kia he ???

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abitada-e-jung he roti he kia ..
apni ankheen kholl le sooti he kia .. ??

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Thanks by the way

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the whole ghazal is nice yaar .. ne ways its ma pleasure

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hai hai kitni kooji awaz main rooti hoo chando

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kaan phaar diye …

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aur kiyon mere thread main “awwwwwwwwwwwwwn awwwwwwwn” kar ke nahoosat phela rahi hoo

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haiN…nahi tu suchi aisa keon hum ne tu ap ko nahi mara chandoo gggg ro nahi warna me be :tear3:

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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ohhhhhhhh…

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aNkhin khuli hooN ya hooN band
gupshup ka dehaN he rahta hai

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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lo yuk na shud dou shud

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yar tumlogon ko roone dhoone ke liye ye hee jagha mili he kia ???

arz kia he ..

roya karainge aap bhi paharoon isi tarhan .. attka kaheen jo aap kaa dil bhi meri tarhan ..

naa taab hijr main hai naa aaraam wasl main ..
kambakht dil ko chain nahi hai kisi tarhan ..

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aankhain mujhe talwoon se wo malne nahi dete .. armaan mere dil ka nikalne nahi dete ..

dil wo he ke fariyaad se lab-rez he har waqt ..
ham wo hain ke kuch moonh se nikalne nahi dete ..

yea chichora sher mera nahi Akber Allahabadi ka he

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Nice

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I’m Gonna Be The Champ
The Way I Wanna Be
( Muhammad ALI )

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Wah! very nice azam jee

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mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

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NAHI SUNTE!! KYA KARLEING???

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humarre pass itni time nahi hai…

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hehehehe…i forgot to say that it was nice one…actually an ok one…i guess i am just not a good listener!!

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..sunaynen .. tho kya sunayen ..

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very nice .. thanks

To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

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sunain…sunain
hum sun nay ke liyay tayaar bethay hain.
nice poem btw

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—~—Maria—~—
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

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Thanks master jee

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Shukraann Mahee jee

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yaar dimagh tumhare paas nahi time tumhare paas nahi … tou he kia tumhare paas ??

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