Something very very special :~)

Pramod · October 16, 2003, 9:21pm

amal sahab,

en dino kaam mein bahot busy hoon..esi liye bazm mein haazir nahin ho paa raha hooN..aaj aaya to aap ki post dekhi..magar it is my bad luck that I don't know urdu..so padh nahin paaya...
anyways...it must be good as it has been written for someone you luv and who is going to be you lifemate...I can understand the emotions from your previous post...
Congrates....

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 17, 2003, 4:59pm

Wah Kyaa baat hay :-)

Amal · October 17, 2003, 7:13pm

Thanx a lot Anwar Qureshi, ~Nazish~, ghazal kisi ke, Lamhay, La’iba, &Passionate, DeSiMuNdA, * Vivacious *, Mindless, irem, PAKISTAN Zindabad, MaSoOm_KaBoOteR, Maheen2002, WiseGuy, Guest7777, nikii and GuL-e-Tasbeeh. Nazm pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1:

NikamiJi mujhey maaloom hey ke nazmeiN aap ko zara mushkil sey hi pasand aati heiN. Lekin mujhey khushi hey ke ye nazm aap ko achi lagi. Aur agar aap ko achi lagi to phir yaqeenan usey bhi achi lagey gi jis ke leeye ye likhi gai. Thanx a lot :~)

Koyal bibi aap ki kul mila kar aatth (8) appearances heiN meri post meiN lekin meri bad’qismati ke meri nazm ke leeye aap ney aek lafz bhi nahi kaha. Mujhey poora yaqeen hey ke aap ney nazm parrhi bhi ho gi aur aap ko achi bhi lagi ho gi lekin meyhaz ittifaaq ki baat hey ke aap ke zehan sey ye nikal gaya ho ga ke aek, aadh lafz is nazm ke baarey meiN bhi kehti chaleiN. Ba’harhaal, meiN khud sey ye farz kar leta hooN ke aap ko nazm na sirf pasand aai balke aap ney isey saraa’ha bhi. Be’had shukriya :~) Lekin agar aap ko nazm pasand na aai ho to meri taseeh zaroor farma dijeeye ga. Rahi baat ghazal/nazm of the month ke title ki, to merey leeye sab sey barra award aap logoN ka merey thread meiN aana aur unhey bharpoor tareeqey sey sarhaana hey. Aap dostoN ki pasandeedgi hi mera award hey aur mujhey is sey ziaada koi shey azeez nahi

chand_chehra mera khayal hey ke Koyal ney sahi kaha hey ke “intzaar kijaiey bahar k mosam ka” … aap bhi aur meiN bhi

ramyssysIX you are actually right. Lekin meiN ney bhi to abhi sirf ye nazm likhi hey aur abhi tak ye sirf merey aur aap logoN ke beech hi hey. Rahi baat nikaah ke baad ke leeye, to us waqt ke leeye kuch aur likh rakheiN ge, aakhir ko apney haath ka hunar hey :~)

ullujii nazm pasand karney aur post karney ke leey bohat shukriya. It’s really a nice poem.

chodhry sahab bohat khushi hui ye jaan kar ke aap ko nazm pasand aai aur ye ke aap bhi meri tarhaN nazmeiN pasand kartey heiN. Rahi baat ye kisi aur sey share karney ki, to Bismillah kijeeye janaab. MeiN to ye nazm abhi un sey share nahi kar sakta jin ke leeye likhi hey, aap to kijeeye. Aur wesey bhi, aek cheez likhi gai hey to yaqeenan kai jaga, kai logoN ke leeye istimaal ho gi, lekin asli dedication to usi ke leeye rahey gi na jis ke leeye ye takhleeq ki gai. I wish you don’t remove the sentence in the brackets:)

Dilsay nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat shukriya. Aur aap ki duwaeiN ke leeye bhi be’had shukriya. So nice of you.

Amjad Bhai aap ke comments ke leeye shukriya. Abhi tak to nahi sunai, bas aap logoN ki raaey ka intizaar tha :~)

Pramod bhai Bohat shukriya ke aap ney nazm parrhey bina hi is par apni pasandeedgi ki mohar laga di. Wesey meiN ney aap ko roman text bheij to dia tha. Mujhey umeed hey aap ko apney comments par pasheymaani nahi hui ho gi

Capricorn · October 17, 2003, 7:39pm

Its remarkable piece od poetry. I wish your endeavour makes our would-be-bhabhee glad to have you in her life. Its a wonderful work, no doubt. :k:

chand_chehra · October 17, 2003, 8:52pm

koi bahana nahi bus hamy dekhna hai

Dania · October 18, 2003, 12:21am

beautiful :k:

Eastern_Thoughts · October 18, 2003, 5:47am

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Originally posted by Amal:

Amjad Bhai aap ke comments ke leeye shukriya. Abhi tak to nahi sunai, bas aap logoN ki raaey ka intizaar tha :~)

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acha ji, and now?, now u got so many coments , 2, 3 days tu guzar gay na ...... i m sure abhi bhi nahi sunaiii :p

Amjad Islam Amjad saying to you!

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Eastern_Thoughts · October 18, 2003, 5:49am

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 19, 2003, 7:59am

Congratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Amal

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 19, 2003, 8:13am

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Congratzz Amal

Shab-e-Hijar · October 19, 2003, 11:06pm

:k: good job ..

chodhry · October 20, 2003, 5:25am

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Originally posted by Amal:

chodhry sahab bohat khushi hui ye jaan kar ke aap ko nazm pasand aai aur ye ke aap bhi meri tarhaN nazmeiN pasand kartey heiN. Rahi baat ye kisi aur sey share karney ki, to Bismillah kijeeye janaab. MeiN to ye nazm abhi un sey share nahi kar sakta jin ke leeye likhi hey, aap to kijeeye. Aur wesey bhi, aek cheez likhi gai hey to yaqeenan kai jaga, kai logoN ke leeye istimaal ho gi, lekin asli dedication to usi ke leeye rahey gi na jis ke leeye ye takhleeq ki gai. I wish you don’t remove the sentence in the brackets:)

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Amal bhai mein share ker bhi chukka pori dedication key saath per aap key copyrights sey :) ussssey bohat achi laggi aur aaap ko salam bhaija hey us ney..hehehe...

Allah krey aap jaldi jaldi hamari honey wali bhabhi sey yeh aur bohat si aur share kero. aur bohat achi zindgi guzzrey aap ki. Aameen.

btw un ko poetry sey koi interst bhi hay ya nahoien? kahien yeh na kahien kia likhtey rehtey ho saara saarra din ;) hehe..

Amal · October 20, 2003, 7:09pm

CC ji sabar ka phal meettha hota hey…wo kahaawat to suni ho gi aap ney, “wait and see”…so pehley wait…and phir…see

Ji ji Amjad bhai comments to kaafi saarey mil gaey heiN lekin asal meiN abhi raabta mumkin nahi hey na, is leeye:(

Chodhry saab acha kia aap ney share kar li jis sey bhi karni thi. Aur ‘unka’ salaam bhi hameiN pohNch gaya…Wa Alykum Assalaam :~) Aur ye to mujhey pata nahi ke unhey bhi poetry sey koi lagaao hey ya nahi. Dikhtey heiN kya soorat-e-haal waqoo-pazeer hoti hey. Aek baar phir duwaaoN ke leeye bohat saara shukriya:)

Cap, Dania_2000, HeArT HaCKeR and Shab-e-Hijar, am glad that you liked this poem. Thanx a lot:flower1:

Koyal · October 20, 2003, 7:25pm

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Originally posted by Amal:

Koyal bibi aap ki kul mila kar aatth (8) appearances heiN meri post meiN lekin meri bad’qismati ke meri nazm ke leeye aap ney aek lafz bhi nahi kaha. Mujhey poora yaqeen hey ke aap ney nazm parrhi bhi ho gi aur aap ko achi bhi lagi ho gi lekin meyhaz ittifaaq ki baat hey ke aap ke zehan sey ye nikal gaya ho ga ke aek, aadh lafz is nazm ke baarey meiN bhi kehti chaleiN. Ba’harhaal, meiN khud sey ye farz kar leta hooN ke aap ko nazm na sirf pasand aai balke aap ney isey saraa’ha bhi. Be’had shukriya :~) Lekin agar aap ko nazm pasand na aai ho to meri taseeh zaroor farma dijeeye ga. Rahi baat ghazal/nazm of the month ke title ki, to merey leeye sab sey barra award aap logoN ka merey thread meiN aana aur unhey bharpoor tareeqey sey sarhaana hey. Aap dostoN ki pasandeedgi hi mera award hey aur mujhey is sey ziaada koi shey azeez nahi :)

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hmmm Amal saheeb hum 8 dafa aiey ap ki thread main ye tu ap ne dekha aur ye na soocha itni dafa anay ka maqasad kia hia kher SHAER hazraat tu jaan he nahi saktey na lufzon ka mafhoom :p
aur CC ne sahi kaha gazal of the month kaha is se bhar kar ap ki tareaf kia ho ghi aur me hai koyal ab insan tu hai nahi k bohat khoob.bari achi,very nice jesay lufz use karay ab biride honay k natey tareaf ka andaz be chrind prind jesa ho gha k wo kia janay k lufzon main tareaf kesay ki jati..any ways..again ap ki nazam shud be nazamof the month itna kafi k more detail :p

PS: apna box khali karen ...jaldi se

Azad · October 21, 2003, 6:40am

Lain Jee gaii bhainss pani main

p.s.

Mobarak ho Jee Dhair sari khushiyan or duain :k:

Namaz bohut hi achi hay … janay kiyon mehsoos hota hay andaz e bayan kisi aisi larki ka hay jo yaqeen or beyaqeeni ki chokatt par baitt kar … Khair Janay dain … lagta hay aaj phir ziyada ho gaii hay

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 21, 2003, 11:51am

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Zindagii kay haseen Lamhaat Tumhaari
Zindagii meiN aaiN aur tum in Lamhaat meiN
Khoh kar apnii maazii kay har dukh bhuul jao
Tumhaaray Naseeb meiN ho aesii chahayaa
jahaaN khushi, dhanak, mehak, tumhaara muqadar ho
Tumhaari Duaa asmaanoN say kabhii Rad na ho
Duur rahay tum say dukh kii Chaadar
Hunstaa khaeltaa asmaaN tumhaara muqadar ho … !

Amal aik baar phir humaari jaanib say Aap ko buhat buhat Mubarak ho humaari duaaiN aap kay saath haiN :-)

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nia_khan · October 25, 2003, 3:35am

speechless

Gemini_the_Great · October 25, 2003, 3:39pm

beautiful

Congratulations :-)

Something very very special :~)

Thanx a lot **Anwar Qureshi, ~Nazish~, ghazal kisi ke, Lamhay, La’iba, &Passionate, DeSiMuNdA, *** Vivacious *, Mindless, irem, PAKISTAN Zindabad, MaSoOm_KaBoOteR, Maheen2002, WiseGuy, Guest7777, nikii and GuL-e-Tasbeeh. Nazm pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1:

NikamiJi mujhey maaloom hey ke nazmeiN aap ko zara mushkil sey hi pasand aati heiN. Lekin mujhey khushi hey ke ye nazm aap ko achi lagi. Aur agar aap ko achi lagi to phir yaqeenan usey bhi achi lagey gi jis ke leeye ye likhi gai. Thanx a lot :~)

chand_chehra mera khayal hey ke Koyal ney sahi kaha hey ke “intzaar kijaiey bahar k mosam ka” … aap bhi aur meiN bhi

ramyssysIX you are actually right. Lekin meiN ney bhi to abhi sirf ye nazm likhi hey aur abhi tak ye sirf merey aur aap logoN ke beech hi hey. Rahi baat nikaah ke baad ke leeye, to us waqt ke leeye kuch aur likh rakheiN ge, aakhir ko apney haath ka hunar hey :~)

ullujii nazm pasand karney aur post karney ke leey bohat shukriya. It’s really a nice poem.

Dilsay nazm pasand karney ke leeye bohat shukriya. Aur aap ki duwaeiN ke leeye bhi be’had shukriya. So nice of you.

Amjad Bhai aap ke comments ke leeye shukriya. Abhi tak to nahi sunai, bas aap logoN ki raaey ka intizaar tha :~)

*Originally posted by Amal: *

Amjad Bhai aap ke comments ke leeye shukriya. Abhi tak to nahi sunai, bas aap logoN ki raaey ka intizaar tha :~)

Amjad Islam Amjad saying to you!

*Originally posted by Amal: *

*Originally posted by Amal: *

Thanx a lot Anwar Qureshi, ~Nazish~, ghazal kisi ke, Lamhay, La’iba, &Passionate, DeSiMuNdA, * Vivacious *, Mindless, irem, PAKISTAN Zindabad, MaSoOm_KaBoOteR, Maheen2002, WiseGuy, Guest7777, nikii and GuL-e-Tasbeeh. Nazm pasand karney ke leeye be’had shukriya:flower1:

Originally posted by Amal:

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