Something very very special :~)

Amal · October 14, 2003, 11:06pm

Through the course of time as I continued to write something which could be called poetry, I dedicated some of my stuff to some of my friends or wrote especially for them.

This time I composed a poem which I wrote exclusively for my fiancée after the engagement. This is my first dedication to her. She doesn’t know about this poem at ll. Let me know whether or not this poem is good enough to be shared with her too.

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AQ · October 14, 2003, 11:08pm

very nice:)

PS: message to Koyal: tumhaiN ghaib kee khabar hoti hai kiyaa:eek:

NikamiJano · October 14, 2003, 11:34pm

Re: Something very very special :~)

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*Originally posted by Amal: *
Through the course of time as I continued to write something which could be called poetry, I dedicated some of my stuff to some of my friends or wrote especially for them.

This time I composed a poem which I wrote exclusively for my fiancée after the engagement. This is my first dedication to her. She doesn’t know about this poem at ll. Let me know whether or not this poem is good enough to be shared with her too.

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Aymal ap ko pata am not nazam person but lucky gal ....it's Really beautiful nazam ap ne likhi un k leay k again u know no .......agay ap khud samjdaar hain ..:)

Koyal · October 14, 2003, 11:39pm

haan bach k rahiey gha Ok..

chand_chehra · October 14, 2003, 11:42pm

woww amal bohat khoob :k:

PS
hamy kub dedar karwye gay is gulab ka

Koyal · October 14, 2003, 11:51pm

abhi intzaar kijaiey bahar k mosam ka abhi beaj laga hia sirf inay kalay na pawo

AQ · October 14, 2003, 11:53pm

yeah:).. but it’s definitely the ghazal of the month :k:

ramyssysIX · October 14, 2003, 11:54pm

MaShaAllah... Leikin abhee to rafaakat ka aaghaaz naheen hua. Abhee to sirf ehd-o-peimaan bandhey gayey hein. Yeah nazm nikaah key baad ziada munasib rahey gee.

_Nazish · October 15, 2003, 12:01am

wah....It's beautiful :-)

luck finace ;-)

ullujii · October 15, 2003, 12:32am

beautyful :k:

ps: jen ke engagement hai un k lieay

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ghazal_kisi_ke · October 15, 2003, 1:58am

bohut khoob:k::k:
thanx for sharing Amal bahii:flower1:

chodhry · October 15, 2003, 3:48am

bohat achi hey amal bhai, bohat achi, u know mughey nazmein zada achi lagti hein, perh key bohat acha lagga. dil kia key mein khud bhi kissi sey share keroon yeh poem per acha nahien lagga key jis key liye likhi gye hey uss sey share na hoi ho aur koi aur banda kissi aur sey ker ley, so jaldi sey un sey share kee jiye na aur bataye ga zaroor mein unni deir onhold hoon..heheh zada deir naien ho ga yeh hold merey sey. aur haan mangni bohat bohat mubarak ho, Allah aap doonu ko hameisha khush rakhey.

Lamhay · October 15, 2003, 6:23am

wah amazing stuff .... wonderful !

La_iba · October 15, 2003, 8:14am

zabardast:k:

Dilsay · October 15, 2003, 5:14pm

Wonderful

Dilsay · October 15, 2003, 5:16pm

Wonderful ....

if this is the first gift for her thn i am sure that her life will be full of roses... may God keep you both happy and give you all the beautiful things this life has...

May the love you both share today grow with each tomorrow...

Bohat see duain aap dono kay liya...

_Passionate · October 15, 2003, 5:17pm

Jesey maut ko koi dhoondta hua, zindagi se aa miley

wahhh…zabardast Amal :k:

DeSiMuNdA · October 15, 2003, 5:52pm

very nice indeed :k:

system · October 15, 2003, 6:03pm

zabardast, be-had khobsurat nazem hai.. :k::k:

aur aap ko bohat bohat Mubarak ho Amal..

Koyal · October 15, 2003, 9:06pm

ahh becharey mods chaliey gazal of the month tu ap k hath lagi after 3 month Amal jaldi jaldi aia karen plzzz