something I wrote....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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KahiN tu jhilmilataa hai
woh ek aansoo numaa sapna

kay shab maiN goonjtee hai jub
humakti,khilkhilatee aah see
tu lagta hai yay tub hum ko
bohat zarkhaiz hai apnay
gham-ae-dil ki yay num mit-tee

aur iss veeraniyay mun say
uRa kay posh-ae-aasooda
laga ker tiktikee daikhaiN
til-ism-e-gham ki bai-baaki

hai soorat dasht ki gharchay
magar ek kunj maiN jaisay
sada malhaar-ae-koyal ki

kahinN tu jhilmilataa hai
woh ek aansoo numa sapna
“kabhi” tu jhilmilata hai
humaisha toot jaata hai…"

Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

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Aaj to bara josh hai aap mein Dhoop Ji!!

Wesey it is Beautiful

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thats some good stuff Dhoop ji, keep um coming :)

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WOW... you're good!... bohat khoob ji... bohat khoob...

zindagi zinda billi ka naam hae...!

5

This is really nice

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Dhoop u r a very good poetess eh…
Keep it up

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keeeep it up

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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very nice

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very nice

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mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

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u ppl. r too kind

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thanks a million

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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

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dare aye durst aye

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Thanx for sharing

11

Khoob bohat kboob -

Alfaz ki tarteeb aur jazbaat ki turjumani

Allah karay zor e qalam aur ziyaada

huwe mar k ham jo Ruswa
huwe kiyuN na gharq e darya

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BOHOT KHOOB........VERY NICE.

~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~