something horribly incomplete

Zindagi kay is rah par
Hum chal diye is qadar
Kay hum par na chayi
Yeh gham ki parchai
Muskaraty rahay hum har pal
Gham ko yoohin chupa kar
Ansoo-on ko na samajh keh kar
Yoohin bhoolatay gaye hum
Ab shikwa kya karain hum
Kay shikwa na kar sakain hum
Kabhi hum sochtay hain
Zindagi kahan chal di
Asmaan ko choonay jaa rahay thay
Zameen par patakh diye gaye
Ab is ko hum kya keh daiin
Jo hai na kehnay kay qaabil


after this my bus came so i couldn’t think of anything anymore, and my writing-something-in-urdu-streak was over for that day…hehe

comments would be appreciated

Boht khoob..:k:

its nice :slight_smile:

thanx HH :flower2:

didn’t expect a reply that soon :slight_smile:

I like your english stuff.

Have any more of that?

(thats just becasue my romanic urdu has alot to be desired)