Something for SomeOne

AmericanDeSi · July 7, 2003, 3:40pm

She’s done it again
crimson flows through her riven skin
pain plays another indifferent friend
to sit with her and hold her until she falls asleep again

you are beautiful
when you’re walking by the ocean
you are beautiful
when you’re falling to the sea
you are beautiful when you’re climbing up the mountain

DeSiMuNdA · July 7, 2003, 3:48pm

nice thoughts AD :)

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 7, 2003, 6:49pm

welcome to poetry sec AD

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 7, 2003, 9:28pm

^^ right:D

AmericanDeSi · July 8, 2003, 3:32am

thanks dude…

HH i really don’t like this section

ghazal kisi ke whats right

PKR · July 8, 2003, 5:47am

nicccceeeeeeeeeeeeee poetry AD :k: :k: :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 8, 2003, 4:43pm

if u dont like this sec. then why did u post here

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 9, 2003, 4:00am

HH again u r right:D^^

mera sar:smack:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 9, 2003, 5:20pm

i am always right hai na sweeto??

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 10, 2003, 3:30am

i dunno:nahnah:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 11, 2003, 1:26pm

fittay mounh tumhara

Swera · July 12, 2003, 2:51am

Nice..

Poori poem likhna thi na...

Muslim_Queen · July 12, 2003, 6:22pm

interesting.

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 12, 2003, 7:49pm

thanks a lot:p:snooty: