some1 is in alain...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ma Pal Aphro’s shair:rolleyes:

jaisay asman aik sitarey ki kami ko mehsoos karta hoga
waisay hi hamay aapki yaad tarpati hai
aap hamay itni asaani say chor kay chalay jatay hain
kiya hum aapko aik dafa bhi yaad nahi aatay hain??

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Re: some1 is in alain…

Aisha, there is a general of rule of poetry which most of the world (those into poetry) follow and that is that if you post someone else’s work or take it from someone else, you give them credit :slight_smile:

Aphrodite19 just posted this same piece (which you took and changed few words) in Blogs just 7-8 minutes ago and you made no reference to that blog.

Do you guys have something going on? :konfused:. I mean Aphro seems to be talking about you too and is wishing that you would not come back on GS and is asking us what you have that she doesn’t and what you are famous for (didn’t know you were famous :konfused: ). Whatever it is, I would suggest you guys talk via PM and settle your differences but since this is poetry forum, you have to give credit and mention where you got the piece from :slight_smile:

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Re: some1 is in alain...

forget Aphro, hows the shair?

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Re: some1 is in alain...

why? :)

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Re: some1 is in alain...

duno aphro itni buzdil hai she wont mind me
mainay uska shair chori kar liya hai to kya hoa

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Re: some1 is in alain...

So first you are calling her buzdil
And then you think it is 'OK' to steal someone else's shair?

Just wanna confirm if this is what you meant in the above post :)

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Re: some1 is in alain…

… :ouch name calling! :khumar:
AID.. :nono:

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Re: some1 is in alain…

nemo:smack: ok fine its Aphro’s shair everyone plzzzz enjoy it!!!