Some Lines From Me

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Bhut Rulati Hai Teri Yaad,Tera Dil Dukhana,Teri Berukhi
Aur
Teri Judai

Its not a proper shair though :sid:

**

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Re: Some Lines From Me

Khayal Acha hai. Give me some time for Islah.

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Bus ik dum aya zehen mein to likh dya :@:

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**andaaz andaaz kii baat hai aur yeh kahnaa durust hogaa k:

kahte haiN k YOU kaa hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur! :smiley:

achchhii kaavish hai bas ise ek kisii ruler pe likhaa taa k lines kii lambaaii kam o besh na ho sake :)**

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Nice try

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proper ko chorro yaar…jo kehna tha, so keh dia… that’s it :clap:

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Shurkiya :)

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:hat:

Yeh baat to hai :sunnyboy:

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Aise hi hota hai. Shru Shru main Shairon ki zehni halat aise hi bigadti hai. :hehe: (j/k)

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Humko Kisi Kay Husan Ne Shair Bana Diya :sunnyboy:

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Sab yehi kehte hain. waise idhar aao raaz ki baat bataon. :fatee: Kisi se kehna mat. Per yeh shairi depression ka intellectual naam hai.

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**yeh to vaisa hii claim hai jaisa kisi ne yuN kaha thaa:

ham ko du’aayeN do tumheN qaatil banaa diyaa!!!**

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Hoga yaar meine konsa shair banana hai :cobra:

Jee baat to ek jaisi he hai

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:lajawab:
ittna dukhi sher :teary2: :frowning: :cryb:

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hummm

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:cobra: :hat: