Sochta huun ke....

Jhanjharewali · December 18, 2007, 1:45am

**sochta huun ke use neend bhi aati hogi
ya faqat meri tarha ashq bahati hogi

woh meri shakl,mera naam bhulane wali
apni tasveer se kya aankh milati hogi?

shaam hote hi wo chaukhat pe jala ke shammaein
apni palkon pe kayee khwab sajati hogi

usne silwaa bhi liye honge siyaah rung libaas
ab Moharram ki tarha Eid manati hogi

hoti hogi mere bose ki talab mei pagal
jab bhi zulfon mei koi phool sajati hogi

roop de kar mujhe iss mei kisi shahzade ka
apne bachon ko kahani woh sunaati hogi (awww)

SYED WASI SHAH

EID MUBARAK MERE PYAARE DOSTON!!!

**

Shab-e-Hijar · December 18, 2007, 1:47am

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awww@ last shair … nice :k:

redidentity · December 18, 2007, 4:16am

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aww is a good ending..

buhat khoob..

muddii · December 18, 2007, 4:44am

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Baad Main Soochnay Ka Kiya Faida............................!!!

Nice post and good choice..........:)

deadsoul · December 18, 2007, 7:30am

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buhat khob JW

canpaki · December 18, 2007, 7:32am

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wow ...thas amazin

very nice...thnks for shairng

aabla_pa · December 18, 2007, 9:15am

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I didnt know wasi shah could produce something like that.
its gr8. :k:

Eid Mubarak 2 u 2 Jhanjhares.
Many thanx 4 sharing this poem.

Aryaan · December 18, 2007, 12:26pm

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It’s Beautiful Jhanjharewali..:k:

Jhanjharewali · December 18, 2007, 1:00pm

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***shab n red *- awww is the perfect ending heina!!

mere fave muddi - baad mei sochne ka koi faida nahi magar khayalon pe kis ka zor chalta hei? The mind is a democratic state!!

*deadsoul *- aap ko hamari posting pasand aai- ji hum aap ke tahe dil se mashkool hein (hows the urdu…lol!)

*canpaki - *u just have good taste **

aabla_pa -** teinu pata ki hei tusi eho pata lagao ji **

Aryaan - im so thoroughly flattered…thnx

Aryaan · December 18, 2007, 1:02pm

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Aur Ab Itne Baras Baad
Aaj Puraane Dard Khangaale
Pichle Kitne Ghanton Se
Apni Iss Nadaani Par Main
Ro Ro Kar Hans Parta Hoon
Lekin Door Kaheen Aankhon Mein
Anjaana Sa Aansoo Ab Bhi
Uth-ta Hai Aur Dab Jata Hai
Chupp Jata Hai
Jaise Kitne Mausam Peechey
Shayed Pura Hafta Meri Aankh Mein
Laali Rachi Rahi Thi...

Wasi Shah

Jhanjharewali · December 18, 2007, 1:16pm

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*wow- very heart wrenching stuff....love the play of words!
Thanks Aryaan for a lovely addition :)
*

bheegiyaad · December 18, 2007, 1:43pm

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JW n Aryaan cool stuff frm both of u :k:

padfoot · December 18, 2007, 2:16pm

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Beautiful sharing :k: Both of u!

Koyal · December 18, 2007, 3:45pm

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V nice Jwali :)

sunny_nicky · December 18, 2007, 4:37pm

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nicee buddy :)

being_lonely · December 18, 2007, 5:00pm

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sorry its wasi no comments

Jhanjharewali · December 18, 2007, 10:45pm

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C'mon Sid! is tra se na dekho poetry ko. sometimes awful writers write good stuff- like this one by WASI SHAH **:CareBear:
**its not dazzling but its a nice read. I like the one Aryaan added though- I was surprised ke Wasi saheb aesa bhi kuch likhten hein!

Aryaan · December 18, 2007, 11:18pm

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Thanks Jhanjharewali, Bheegiyaad, Padfoot & Sunny..
**
Wasi Shah** beshak ek achey shayer hain… lekin SId bro najaane kyun iss baat se itefaaq nahi rakhte..

EEMAAN · December 19, 2007, 3:05am

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Awwww,,,it is beautiful JW SIS..

muddii · December 19, 2007, 4:45am

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Jii Jii mind is a democratic state purr at times acts like the democracy in Pakistan…(under the miltary rulers)