SOCHNE BAITHE TUJHE TO...

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 5:17am

Sochne baithe tujhe
to kaise kaise dar khule
jo muqfil thay sadion se
aj wo bam-o-dar khule
hum jis ki misaal dete thay
wo to be misal he raha
jo kabhi na dekhe thay
aise aise johar khule
ankhain khaira ho gain
kuch ajab sa dekh ker
jo pas-e-manzar rhe
aj wo manzar khule
daad dena thi magar
be-daad sa ker dia
jo na dekhe thay kabhi
aj wo taiwer khuley
her taraf be-chaini si hai
her taraf na itmena(n)
bhattka dia tha or jis ne
mujh ko wo rehber mile
meri qismat ka sitara
gum kahin pe ho gaya
na mai chahun roshni
na he wo akhtar khule….

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 5:19am

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oops i have done somethin wrong...can any MOD make it clear plz?

KKF · January 6, 2011, 5:41am

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Sochne baithe tujhe
to kaise kaise dar khule
jo muqfil thay sadion se
aj wo bam-o-dar khule
hum jis ki misaal dete thay
wo to be misal he raha
jo kabhi na dekhe thay
aise aise johar khule
ankhain khaira ho gain
kuch ajab sa dekh ker
jo pas-e-manzar rhe
aj wo manzar khule
daad dena thi magar
be-daad sa ker dia
jo na dekhe thay kabhi
aj wo taiwer khuley
her taraf be-chaini si hai
her taraf na itmena(n)
bhattka dia tha or jis ne
mujh ko wo rehber mile
meri qismat ka sitara
gum kahin pe ho gaya
na mai chahun roshni
na he wo akhtar khule….
**
maiN ne Theek kar diyaa jaise taise kar sakaa.

aapkaa kalaam paRhaa. pasand aayaa...likhti rahiye aise hii. shukria share karne ke liye :)**

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 5:47am

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thank u so much g...pehle wala to perrha he nhi ja rha tha...thanx again.

KKF · January 6, 2011, 5:49am

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ji...welcome.

Sannan · January 6, 2011, 5:50am

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u can correct it too kamal ho gia hay Edit ka button press kar kay Edit MOD mein dobara cut paste kar lo

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 5:59am

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mene MOD ka button press nahi kia,direct MOD ko he keh dia tha

Sannan · January 6, 2011, 6:10am

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Edite Post key baaat key hay Edit Edit

Edit button ko click karo to Edite Mode mein chali jao gi

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 6:46am

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ker dia hay theek

Sannan · January 6, 2011, 7:35am

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Bari Meharbani

fasih_ahmed · January 6, 2011, 9:54am

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Slaam dosto . Im new on this forum but really bohat achi kawish hai sab ko ikatha kernay ki .. Awr aap ne bohat khub likha dost . Keep writing . U really make reader feel words :)

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 10:15am

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thanx Fasih...your name is awsome...u have chosen the right place to post your creations...welcome here :)

fasih_ahmed · January 6, 2011, 10:30am

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regards dear .... aap jesay dost saath hain to will keep posting aap sab bohat elegant hain ...... i really enjoy here .......... kafi ersay se bas as a reader visit kerta tha ... lakin aap sab ki ilfaaz se mutaliq nifasat dekhtay huay i decided to join .. :)

Sannan · January 6, 2011, 10:34am

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Allah aap ko khush rakhay aur qadam qadam par khushian naseeb karay MashaAllah aap ko khush daikh kar lagta hay mairay kaleejay mein thand par gai hay
khush raho bhai

Shazia_Arif · January 7, 2011, 6:32am

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:)

Shazia_Arif · January 7, 2011, 6:33am

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Sannan · January 7, 2011, 1:55pm

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Why u beat me i was talking with Fasih

Amal · January 7, 2011, 8:52pm

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Jeeti rahiye k:

Shazia_Arif · January 8, 2011, 6:00am

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thanx chachu.

rajey · January 14, 2011, 12:20pm

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bahut khoob!