is ishq main hum ne kia khoya kia paya
kabhi fursat ke lamhaat mile to sochain ge
behr-e-dil main aik talatum barpaa hai
meri sochon ko sabaat mile to sochain ge
tu na raha to chahny walay aur bhi hain
teri yaadon se nijaat mile to sochain ge
suna hai log baton baton main bana lete hain apna
koi hum ko aisi baat mile to sochain ge
sab kehty hain tu jhota teri wafa jhotti
gar hum ko bhi ye khadshaat mile to sochain ge
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bohat alaa...chaa gai larrki...m really impressed by your grammer.
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grammer mujhey kabhi b samajh ani aati 
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shukariyan larki ki aapa jaan 
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tumhy samajh kia aata hai bata do wo hi likh don gi 
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mujhey frog ko pakarna aur uski leg pieces banana samjh a jata hai 
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acha ab ye main kese likhon 
barish ke bad samnay walay play ground main frogs to boht hain
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bas sab neele peele harey gray kalay frogs ko dkehein aur 1 poem likh dain
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Mujhay song yaad aa gia "iss ishaq main hun nay jo khoya jo paya hay Sub Maya hay "
BTW is it your own poetry ? bcoz i've read it somewhere else as well
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tum sirf apna fa SONG THARKI yaad kerty ahe lagte ho:wub:
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zabardast INNOCENT 
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jo hukam meri aaqi
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Mujhay song yaad aa gia "iss ishaq main hun nay jo khoya jo paya hay Sub Maya hay "
BTW is it your own poetry ? bcoz i've read it somewhere else as well
jee its very much my own poetry...:)
were did you read it?
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thankuuu jia 
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aisa feel hoing ham koi charagh wali jin
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plz araam se kharri ho k shukriah karo,mujhe sir hilane wale log zehar lagte hain 
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plz kuch aqal ka ilaj karao or jin pe itna bhyanak ilzaam na lagao 
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I read it some other forum with some other name 
Did u post it some where else ?
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mere paas aqal hai hi nai
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haan tum jin hi to ho:p