Soch!

Hum jaab chalaiN jaiN gay to rakay ga kon khiyal tera
Bin kahay jo itni bataiN kartay ho unhaiN samjah kon karay ga
Tumhari “na” main bhi haan hoti hay, janay ga koi kesay
Tumhary ghusay maiN bhi to choopa hay kitna piyar koi kesy samjy ga
Tumhari hansi main bhi kahiN ghum choopa hota hay sochy ga koi kesy
Yahi soch kaar hum teri rafaqat ki duaaiN kartaiN haiN bohat..

By Subha.

buhet khoob :k:

Re: Soch!

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Hum jaab chalaiN jaiN gay to rakay ga kon khiyal tera
Bin kahay jo itni bataiN kartay ho unhaiN samjah kon karay ga
Tumhari "na" main bhi haan hoti hay, janay ga koi kesay
Tumhary ghusay maiN bhi to choopa hay kitna piyar koi kesy samjy ga
Tumhari hansi main bhi kahiN ghum choopa hota hay sochy ga koi kesy
Yahi soch kaar hum teri rafaqat ki duaaiN kartaiN haiN bohat..

By Subha.
[/QUOTE]

  nice subha aaj tu aap buhat he acha likh rahe hein . i like it . plz ub tu apne book publish ker he dein.

 Really u write a nice poetry .

Shukriya ji:-)

Re: Re: Soch!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Adeel786: *

  nice subha aaj tu aap buhat he acha likh rahe hein . i like it . plz ub tu apne book publish ker he dein.

 Really u write a nice poetry . 

[/QUOTE]

Thank you.. :-)

Aray abhi kesy publish karwa lain hum kitab apni.....:)

Abhi to safar or thora karna hay!

bohat khoob :k:

Thank you.

:)

nice..

niceeeee :flower2:

Very nice.....

Good stuff, but not well executed by the poet.

Sorry, but thats what I feel