sitaare

tahreem_saeed · March 15, 2007, 4:50am

AankhoN se TooTte haiN sitaare to kya hua
Chalte nahiN vo saath hamare to kya hua
ToofaaN ki zad meiN azm mere saath saath tha
Kashti ko mil sake na kanare to kya hua
Tanhayion ne mujh ko gale se laga liya
vo ban sake na dil se hamare to kya hua
Sau hausle hamare qadam choomte rahe
Kuchh be sukooN raat guzare to kya hua
Manzil bhi, kaarwaN bhi, musafir bhi khud raha
Saathi bane na Hamaray chaand sitaare to kya hua…?

kaisee lagi sid?

Gondal_007 · March 15, 2007, 4:59am

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Great!

tahreem_saeed · March 15, 2007, 5:06am

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thanks

hiba_no.1 · March 15, 2007, 5:18am

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nice

Dushwari · March 15, 2007, 5:33am

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awesome!
your rhyme schemes are making me improve my poetry, also because the state calls for nothing but a sad lyric.

dil sey, rooh sey chaha jin ko, in sey sahth ka wada poora na howa
num sitarey jarey howeye hein un kedmoon ke khakh per, aisey bikhrey...
tow kiya howa

aabla_pa · March 15, 2007, 7:07am

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WoW. It was really Good.
Hamein to bhot achi lagi. Im sure SID's gona Love it 2 :)

moonmine · March 15, 2007, 4:07pm

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lovely!

being_lonely · March 16, 2007, 3:00am

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Yep m gona love it cuz yeh ghazal mujhe sach mein bohat pasand hai thanks TS jee

n abla paa i think u r changing the team dekh raha hon mein sabh

being_lonely · March 16, 2007, 3:06am

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Sirf aik misra kahonga is k jawab mein

Marna To Tha He, Mar Gaya Tishna To Kya Hua

tahreem_saeed · March 16, 2007, 3:28am

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no thanks sid ji aap ki zara nawazi hai

aabla_pa · March 16, 2007, 8:06am

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Sir Jee. Hum aap ki team mein thay or aap ki hi team mein hein.

rashidali · March 16, 2007, 10:21am

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Buhat khoob TS