Sirhanay meray our bhala kia hoga

Azad · February 8, 2003, 4:01pm

Sirhanay meray our bhala kia hoga
chand awraaq preshaan
chand chorriyan ttoti howein
khuch aansu dhalkay howay
khuch khawab aadhoray say
kuch bal zulf e preshaan kay poray say
sirhanay meray
our bhala kia hoga

Adab Arz
(Azad)

Dilsay · February 8, 2003, 4:02pm

Kiya baat hai Azad jee....

Akk baat aap kiya siraf weekend par likhtay hoo....

this is really beautiful....

Capricorn · February 8, 2003, 4:14pm

Azad jee woh jo chand aansoo’aon ka zikr kia to poochna yeh tha ke botal mein band kar ke rakhe hain kiya? Aur chooriyaan woh bhee totee huee jo aap ke sarhaane rakhee huee hain unke toot’ne ka raaz kia tha? Aur aakhir mein ek explanation darkaar hai :----

kuch bal zulf e preshaan kay poray say
Is ka kia matlab banta hai?

Azad · February 8, 2003, 4:35pm

cute

Our teri tasweer nahi
Dil par koi tehreer nahi
Paon tayar uttnay to safar main
** Phir bhi rahain Hum uss zulf kay assar main **

jab bhi hum janay ki karain
to woh apni ** zulf e pareshaan say lambhay baal **thorr kar
humaray haat our paon kay gird lapaitt kar, kahay
ab koi jaa kay to daikhay

Capricorn · February 8, 2003, 4:52pm

Yeh to ghalat tradition hai..humzulfon ke asar mein rehna naheen chahiye is se donon behnein naraaz rehtee hain
I understood the explanation though
Thanks :k:

Azad · February 8, 2003, 4:57pm

Azad · February 9, 2003, 7:24am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Kiya baat hai Azad jee....

Akk baat aap kiya siraf weekend par likhtay hoo....

this is really beautiful....
[/QUOTE]

:)

Philanthrope · February 9, 2003, 8:36am

:k:

Amal · February 9, 2003, 1:40pm

Re: Sirhanay meray our bhala kia hoga

Beautiful:k:…very touching…thanx for sharing

Azad · February 9, 2003, 3:37pm

Nawazish Pharma, Zara Nawazi Amal Jee

WiseGuy · February 9, 2003, 4:04pm

Khoob :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 9, 2003, 8:29pm

Beautiful,Thanks for sharing:)

Azad · February 10, 2003, 5:17am

WG
Gul e T
Thank you

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 11, 2003, 3:28am

Re: Sirhanay meray our bhala kia hoga

beautiful azad jee:k::k:
keep writing:)

system · February 11, 2003, 1:38pm

hameesha ki tara bohat khoobsurat hai,:k: keep it up… flower1:

Azad · February 12, 2003, 4:30am

Thank you Ghazal K K, you are on line so Eid mubarak aap ko

Azad · February 12, 2003, 4:34am

aap bhi to khobsorat ho , aap on line hotien to aap say bhi eid mil layte

Capricorn · February 12, 2003, 8:19am

Chichorapan :halo: Aaj ke din naheen :nono:

Capricorn · February 12, 2003, 8:27am

Dar gaye kia…jokin’ na
Eid Mubarak

system · February 12, 2003, 12:59pm

app ko bhi Eid Mubarak…