so yeh ab teh hei ke umr bhar nahin milna
tou phir yeh umr bi kyoon gar tum se nahin milna
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Naiklarki kyonke…
Hayaat lay aayee,aaye, qazaa lay chalee, chale
Na apnee khushee aaye, na apnee khushee chale
Asif, Zauq saahib qabr mein bilbila rahe hoon ge:–)
Laai hayaat aaye qaza le chali chale
Na apani Khushi aaye na apani khushi chale
aur…Shair se m’aazrat ke saath…
uss ki duniya mein zeest ke samaan jaltay hein
fareb e zindagi ki aag mein insaan jaltay hein
Gham e hasti ka Asad kis se ho juz marg ilaaj?
Shama har rang main jalti hai sehar honay tak!
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[This message has been edited by Asif (edited February 11, 2002).]
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Asif,
jaata hoon daagh e hasrat e hasti liay hovay
hoon shamma e kushta dar'khur e mehfil nahin raha
bhala bujhi hoi shamma ka mehfil mein kia kaam?
sigh
and thanks you all for the liking of the sh'er:--)
Naiko for once I disagree (sher bohat khoobsoorat hai )and I only claim to have listened to the ghazal not read it anywhere…its:
tu kiya ya tai hai kay ab umr bhar nahi milna
tu phir ye umr bhi kiyun tum say gur nahi milna…
chalo zamanay ki khaatir ye jabr bhi seh lain
kay ab kabhi jo milay toot ker nahi
milna…
rahay wafa kay musaafir ko kon samjhaa’ay
kay iss safar main koee humsafar nahi milna…
sorry got carried away…
aur haan wo doosra sher aisay nahi hai kay:
laaee hayaat aa’ay,qaza lay chali chalay
apni khushi say aa’ay na aoni khushi chalay?
waisay u r the expert
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, maybe I remember
incorrectly.
[This message has been edited by Dhoop (edited February 13, 2002).]
BOHAT KHUB B-H JEE..
Veri Nice ....
Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !
pyaari dhoop, thank you very much for the whole thing...this is so beautiful:--)
aur Zauq ka sh'er tou aisay hi sahi hei jese mein ne likha hei....i double checked it...hugz:--)
and thanx all!