Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Shughal ye mohabat ka
janay kab say tehraa hai…

shab ko siskiyan bharna
uljhe uljhe shamon mein
khud say baat na karna
pyaar karnay walon ko
dekh dekh kay darna
khamoshi k saay pay
aa’haton ka pehra hai
shughal ye mohabat ka
janay kab say tehra hai

din charhay tu sou layna
dil k gahray zakhmon ko
Ansoon say dhoo layna
yun he hastay hastay he
phoot phoot ro layna
chahaton k sar he kyun
siskiyon ka sehra hai
shughal ye mohabat ka
janay kab say tehra hai

sab hai ye mohabat ka
aur wabal kis ka hai
jo tha kho gaya hai sab
ab sawaal kis ka hai
khali khali ankhon mein
yee malaal kis hai

kyun kar chekhtay ho tum
kis ko ab sunatay ho
naag ye mohabat ka
Andha,gonga behra hai
Shugal ye Mohabat ka
janay kab say tahra hai

please friendz…do tell me …maree poem kaisee lagee app ko??

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

Beautifully expressed, yet very simple.. Amazing tehreer..

:hugz: its awesome..

What is that one thing, you can't live without *_*
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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

such kah rahay ho???:aq:

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

Jee dear.. dekho mujhe laga k kuch parts are lil weak.. but kuch parts are amazing.. so over all impact is so beautiful k weaknesses chhup gaeen.. samjhay :)

esp ye part.. i loved it

shab ko siskiyan bharna
uljhe uljhe shamon mein
khud say baat na karna
pyaar karnay walon ko
dekh dekh kay darna
khamoshi k saay pay
aa'haton ka pehra hai
shughal ye mohabat ka
janay kab say tehra hai

din charhay tu sou layna
dil k gahray zakhmon ko
Ansoon say dhoo layna
yun he hastay hastay he
phoot phoot ro layna
chahaton k sar he kyun
siskiyon ka sehra hai
shughal ye mohabat ka
janay kab say tehra hai

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

ahan............
chalain jee....will try to improve............:)

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

beautiful, keep it up

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

it is, a nice effort indeed. lyrical i must say. keep it up :)

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

wah sonia ggg very nice :) keep it up :)

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

It’s a wonderful piece soniaa_jee :k: … Bohat khoobsoorat tehreer hey… Thanx for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

very well written soniaa_jee :slight_smile:

khamoshi k saay pay
aa’haton ka pehra hai

very well conceived as well :k:

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

Buhat achi poem hey sonia, keep it up girl, u got talent:-)

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka...................

thanks AQ.....................Amal..............n GUl.................
app ki appreciation.............is really helpful for me.....to take a step forward :)

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

Khoobsuart nazam kahi hai sj aap ne ~halka halka dard liye apnay andar bohat pyarai nazam :bb:

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Re: Shughal ye Mohabat Ka…

thanks Sid:sheen: