Shirk...

**Aaj usne hamari muhabbat me kisi ko shareek kiya to ehsaas hua YA RAB

Ke TU shirk kerne walon ko maaf kyun nahi kerta**

Re: Shirk…

Good :k:

Insaan bhi kia ajeeb cheez hai, khuda ko bhi apne jazbaat se parakhne ki koshish karta hai

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tu isay quote he share kar detay....bay wazan shair bananay ki zaroorat kiya thi?

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ye azad nazm hai, jo shair ki soorat main dhaalne ki koshish ki gai hai

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do line ki azad nazam .... yehi shairi kis simat ja rahi hai :( ?

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aisi shairy kahin nahin jati,udhar hi ruki rehti hai

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fast lane main ja rahi hai :stuck_out_tongue:

waise 2 lines ke azad nazmen to Parveen Shakir ne bhi likhi hai… like Kohistan ka Almiya.. we included it in our ‘Mukhtasir Nazmen’ thread:

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/556426-mukhtasir-nazmen-3.html

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:uz::lajawab: