Shikwa Gilaa Apni Jaga..

redidentity · October 8, 2007, 7:49am

Aik Ghazal,

Shikwa Gilaa Apni Jaga
Harf-e-Duaa Apni Jaga

Naraazgi Qa’im Hai Per
Ehd-e-Wafa Apni Jaga

Tumhi Na Aye Laut Ker
Main Hoon Khara Apni Jaga

Her Suu Tumhari Yaad Ka
Jalta Diaa Apni Jaga

Le Ker Dil-e-Betaab Main
Chalta Raha Apni Jaga

(Ahmer; October 6, 2007)

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

PS: Na’Mukammal Si Hai..

SJ · October 8, 2007, 7:56am

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its nt…Namukamal…
Amazing Ahmer…bohat he khoob…
bohat touchy hai…
its really hav ur innocenc in it…

redidentity · October 8, 2007, 7:58am

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haww..

thnx alot sisso

U always appreciate me off the way.. which gimme so much encouragement…

thnx alot

SJ · October 8, 2007, 8:07am

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wel Bro app ko encouragement ki zarorat nahin…coz u r an excellent poet…
app suchmein amazing likhtay ho

redidentity · October 8, 2007, 8:14am

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thnx dear :)

bheegiyaad · October 8, 2007, 8:17am

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simple n attractive :)

redidentity · October 8, 2007, 8:52am

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thnx bheegiyaad :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 8, 2007, 8:53am

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nice:)

redidentity · October 8, 2007, 8:59am

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thnx MM :)

redidentity · October 10, 2007, 4:08am

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Ab yahan koi nahi koi nahi aye ga???? !

Asif2000 · October 10, 2007, 7:55pm

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Simplicity has its own appeal. Most said with least words is an art and not many people have it. Darya ko koozay maiN dalnay wali baat hay. You are better than you realize. Keep it up.

Azad · October 10, 2007, 11:28pm

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khoob :k:

redidentity · October 11, 2007, 4:24am

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thnx alot Asif n Azad :)

fizatiq · October 11, 2007, 11:14am

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very nice...

deadsoul · October 11, 2007, 3:53pm

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very nice

dreamgul · October 11, 2007, 4:14pm

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bhut khob

Asif2000 · October 11, 2007, 6:54pm

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Hope you don't mid a few additions:

manzil kee jaanib haiN qadam
per raasta apni jaga

barzakh purana ho chala
saaya raha apni jaga

tere sitam manzoor haiN
meree wafa apni jaga

haNs kay kaha thaa alwida
ansoo baha apnee jaga

redidentity · October 12, 2007, 4:12am

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thnx alot deadsoul, fiza n dreamgul :)

redidentity · October 12, 2007, 4:12am

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w0w Asif.. thnx alot.. they are really awesome..

main rakh loon ye ashaar?? :$

Asif2000 · October 12, 2007, 5:36am

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Sorry I meant "manzoor", not mazoor in my third shair. And yes, they are yours to keep.