Sher-O-Shayari -> 2 ashaarrrrr bi DRAGONBOI

DRAGONBOI · June 7, 2008, 11:34am

Zakhm itnay gehray hain k izhar kia karain
Ham kud nishana ban gae waar kya karaen
Mar gae ham magar Khuli rahi Ankhen
Ab is se zyada unka intizar kia karaen

Shab-e-Hijar · June 8, 2008, 5:56am

.Mar gae ham magar Khuli rahi Ankhen . thats kindda scary

j/k

Nice shair

AQ · June 8, 2008, 6:12am

meri contribution:

Afssoss kaY duniyaa saY safffar kar gayaa peDu
**AnkhaiN tau khuli reh gayiN, par mar gaya peDu **

Nawazish

Shab-e-Hijar · June 8, 2008, 7:58am

lol

DRAGONBOI · June 10, 2008, 9:23am

Re: Sher-O-Shayari -> 2 ashaarrrrr bi DRAGONBOI

Mohabbat ne jab thukra diya
Dard ne hamein thaam liya
Dilbar ne jab dil ko chot di
Dil ke zakhmon ne hamein aaraam diya
Tamaam umr jis ke liye Hum tadaptey rahe
Usi qaatil ne sare aam hamein Ruswaa kiya

S.786 · June 10, 2008, 9:31am

Re: Sher-O-Shayari -> 2 ashaarrrrr bi DRAGONBOI

buhut khoob...... D.G.....and welcome hear

_Masoom_Muskaan · June 10, 2008, 9:36am

Re: Sher-O-Shayari -> 2 ashaarrrrr bi DRAGONBOI

kerne he to kam ke post keryn werna meyn ne marna he :ASA:

abeeha · June 10, 2008, 9:53am

Re: Sher-O-Shayari -> 2 ashaarrrrr bi DRAGONBOI

**Marne k baad bhi meri ankhen khuli rahin
aadat jo parr gae thi tere intezar ki

both these sher r very nice...
**

abeeha · June 10, 2008, 9:55am

aray masoom madam ji tumhe kia aiteraaz hay koi jo marzi post kare:smilestar:

DRAGONBOI · June 10, 2008, 11:29am

site ka name gup shap hai or yaha hum ne koi metric k papers nahi denay

chalo ab gap shap lagao or kam ki batain kisi or site mai karna

ahsan1122 · August 6, 2008, 2:03am

yehi baht hai keh baitha hoa hai sar jukay.....
mjy ojar kr who shaksh sharmsar to hai............