sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

aeno · February 4, 2009, 9:48am

ek ek lafz ko hazar maani pehnaye hum ne
chain se raat ko sone na dya teri adhori batoon ne
jal thal musam me ek hi naqash zehan me ubharta hai
or kisi ko yaad na kiya hum ne tere siwa bhari barsatoon me

Saqi_the_angel · February 4, 2009, 9:49am

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

acha to baat yahaN tak paunch chuki hai??

Ahmi · February 4, 2009, 10:07am

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

nahi g is say b aagay tak ja chuki hai...

Starlight · February 5, 2009, 6:30am

vah. sahi mei dil ko choo gaya.

being_lonely · February 5, 2009, 12:28pm

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

Umda aeno :k:

being_lonely · February 5, 2009, 12:31pm

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

Hum Bhi Yaad Kartay Hain Woh Bhi Yaad Aatay Hain Ik Yehi Ta'aluq Hai Jis Ko Hum Nibhaatay Hain

Shab-e-Hijar · February 5, 2009, 6:03pm

Nice shair hum bhi post kary kya?

aeno · February 5, 2009, 6:09pm

humein sharam a rahi hai aesi batein na karein

aeno · February 5, 2009, 6:14pm

umda sid bhai :k:

aeno · February 5, 2009, 6:16pm

thnks star light :)

aeno · February 5, 2009, 6:18pm

sure shab , y not :)

aeno · February 11, 2009, 9:38am

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

mujhe naseeb hoa uske dehaan me rehna
zameen pe reh ker b asmaan pe rehna
wo mera nhi magar mujhe mil jaye ga
*mujhe acha lagta hai isi gumaan me rehna *

sitarokasitara · February 12, 2009, 7:02pm

Cool

aeno · February 12, 2009, 8:19pm

Re: sher, jo dil ko choo jaye

thnk u sitara :)