When, the other day I told her
I feel affection for you
With all me heart
She did not believe me
When I told her
I can not survive without you
She did not believe me
“You are my life”
I whispered in her ear
She still did not believed me
& when I said,
“I am deceitful”
She cheered & said,
“I believe you now”!!
(But I am thinking
Does she not believe in herself or me?)
In her self... you are clear...
^ Thanks for replying, Dilsay...
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
^ Thanks for replying, Dilsay...
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no it was not a reply it is true you cleared your self and if after that she did not believe you means she does not belive her self
Acha ji, but I don’t know who is she:smack2: coz I just wrote the poem …
I beleive you too :D
Nice poem, thank you for sharing :)
Re: She Did Not Believe Me
aaj kal ki akhaa rhi ho?
humm
u ,too believe like her At the end what he said? 
thnkx & u r most welcome:D
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
:)
aaj kal ki akhaa rhi ho?
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u mean being laRka?:-|
Asal maiN, chodhry meray sath ik maslah hay maiN shair logooN ki tarah shairi nahiN kerti:o I mean kay apni rawada nahin likhti sirf balkay jo ass paas feel kerti wo bhi likh det:-\ samj ai? wesay apsa ki gaal hay mujhay ap ki baat ki samj nahiN ai:-P
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hey I asked, aaj kal kia kha rhi ho (what are u eating now days)
as u r getting creative day by day. :k:
It was a compliment 
PS: tum ko kis ney bataya key shayer loug hamiesa apney pey hi likhtey hein. Allama Iqbal, Habib Jalib , Faiz sab ney apney aas paas pey zada likha hay. its only a phase where u keep on revolving around urself. mujhey khushi hey key tum ‘meiN’ key chungal sey nikal gye ho. keep it up.
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^^ ops! well doing nothing , getting ready 4 something:D & thnkx for the compliment. & kisi nay bataya nahiN:-\
& thnkx again. ap sunao kia ho raha ajj & kaal:p
OK