Re: Shayer Fehmi
If you pick one line from one poem and another line from another poem, I do not think that you would also be able to Copy&Paste the ideas also that were part, or rather, the reason behind those two different lines from two different poems. Putting all together will only result in a potpourri of confused emotions and expressions.
Thanks. In that case, would you please make a comment on poem #1 here as I requested above - including confused emotions, loosing a line of thought, making no sense. Does #1 make no sense? How is it confusing? Does each verse in standard Urdu Ghazal not tell a different thing related to the topic? How is #1 different in that respect?
PS: I would like your thoughts in poem #2 as well. Thanks to initiate a discussion. I hope NikamiJano and others will join us later. Is it too much I am asking of you?