Meh logo ko bulata raha,
Lekin phir bhi akala rehgaya.
Najanay kiyun kisi doobtay hue musafir ko bachatay bachatay hue,
Meh hi kiyun doobgaya.
Dhoontay hongay mujhay meray janaywala abhi bhi shayad,
Abhi bhi shayad kui sahil peh kharay hokay meray liye aansoun bahata hoga.
this is just a rough draft i have so far, let me know what you all think of it???
Re: Shayad
Its Very nice… :k:
Re: Shayad
thanx GS
but would you recommend any additions or changes?????
take care
salam
Re: Shayad
If you are asking me....
Dilsay kaheen howee batoon ko badla nahi jaa sakta...
jasay hai usi hall main bohat achi hai
Re: Shayad
hey thanx a lot dilsay
anybody else has any other comments??
Re: Shayad
That’s very touching. Nice try Renegade:k:
Re: Shayad
hey thanku Amal