Shayad tu mujh hee mien gum tha k bichra jo..

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 18, 2004, 1:30pm

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Kitaab mein rakhay hoay phool ki khushbo jaise Udaas lamhoN ki ho guftago jaise

MehromiyoN ki duldul mien mohoom si tamanna AndheroN mein roshnii ki jistajo jaise

Hangama-e-shehR mein sukoon ki chund ghariya`N
Khud ho be-naam doubonay ki aarzo jaise

Dekh sakoon, sun sakoon na bol sakoN khuwahishoN ki lutt gayee ho aabroo jaise

Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

Nazi83 · September 18, 2004, 1:34pm

uff wow very nice

Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 18, 2004, 2:00pm

thanks naazii :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 18, 2004, 7:56pm

Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

bohut khoob .. :k: ..

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 18, 2004, 8:15pm

thanks Gkkuu :)

IS · September 18, 2004, 10:47pm

Very Nice HH

chand_chehra · September 19, 2004, 3:14am

very nice :k:

reet · September 19, 2004, 4:52am

Kitaab mein rakhay hoay phool ki khushbo jaise Udaas lamhoN ki ho guftago jaise

Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

Very nice…:k::k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 19, 2004, 8:07am

thanks IS.. chanduu.. and reet . .

Sinner · September 19, 2004, 8:11am

nice but i read only first two lines

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 19, 2004, 8:20am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Sinner: *
nice but i read only first two lines
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chalien itna hee kafii hai. thanks :)

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · September 19, 2004, 3:19pm

moona… koi gamgeen poem sunao

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 19, 2004, 7:57pm

aww kia ho gaya hai ..

EEDIOT · September 19, 2004, 11:25pm

nice1 .. :k: ..

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Koyal · September 20, 2004, 12:10am

Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

v nice ..:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 20, 2004, 11:30am

thanks geediot :p and koyal

Aryaan · September 20, 2004, 12:56pm

Bohat khoob :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 20, 2004, 3:37pm

thx Aryaan

Saqi_the_angel · September 21, 2004, 8:49am

Re: Shayad tu mujh hee mien gum tha k bichra jo..

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Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
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Shayad tu mujh hee mein gum tha k bichra jo
Bicherne laga mujhse mera har azoo jaise

[/QUOTE]

Sarkar Share karney ka shukriya.

Is maiN koi shak Nahin jab koi apna bichrta hai to:

Jab koi apna chala jaye chura kar daman
to dil pe talwar si chal jaati hai

Saqi

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 21, 2004, 11:20am

thx for likin.. and sharing.. nice shair :)