Shayad Teray Bicharnay ki !!!

Lamhay · March 22, 2003, 6:36pm

Nafrat Ki Zad Pe Apni Mohabbat Bhi Aa Gaye
Hum Jis Se Dar Rahe They Woh Nobat Bhi Aa Gaye

Dil Key Muamlat Gawahon Mein Bat GAye
Phir Do Dilon Ke Beech Adalat Bhi Aa Gaye

Jo Wajah-e-Dushmani They Teray Meray Darmian
Us Mein Kayee Dilon Ki Adawat Bhi Aa Gaye

Ik Ajnabi Diyar Mein Bey Saiban They Hum
Sir Per Ridaye-e-Shaam-Rafaqat Bhi Aa Gaye

Hathon Mein Is Ne Haath Dia Is Khaloos Se
Rag Rag Mein Jaan, Qalab Mein Himmat Bhi Aa Gaye

BUJH BUJH KER JHILMILANE LAGA TAAQ PER CHIRAAGH
SHAYAD TERAY BICHARNAY KI SAA-UT BHI AA GAYE !!!

Dilsay · March 22, 2003, 6:42pm

Re: Shayad Teray Bicharnay ki !!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Nafrat Ki Zad Pe Apni Mohabbat Bhi Aa Gaye
Hum Jis Se Dar Rahe They Woh Nobat Bhi Aa Gaye

Dil Key Muamlat Gawahon Mein Bat GAye
Phir Do Dilon Ke Beech Adalat Bhi Aa Gaye
**
Jo Wajah-e-Dushmani They Teray Meray Darmian
Us Mein Kayee Dilon Ki Adawat Bhi Aa Gaye**

Ik Ajnabi Diyar Mein Bey Saiban They Hum
Sir Per Ridaye-e-Shaam-Rafaqat Bhi Aa Gaye

Hathon Mein Is Ne Haath Dia Is Khaloos Se
Rag Rag Mein Jaan, Qalab Mein Himmat Bhi Aa Gaye

BUJH BUJH KER JHILMILANE LAGA TAAQ PER CHIRAAGH
SHAYAD TERAY BICHARNAY KI SAA-UT BHI AA GAYE !!!
[/QUOTE]

beautiful... nothing can be said about this... great...

Lamhay · March 22, 2003, 6:48pm

thanks dilsay :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 23, 2003, 12:11am

lamhay sis excellent choice as usuall:k::k:
thanks for sharing:)

Swera · March 23, 2003, 7:26am

:) so nice:)

Capricorn · March 23, 2003, 7:34am

Re: Shayad Teray Bicharnay ki !!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Nafrat Ki Zad Pe Apni Mohabbat Bhi Aa Gaye
Hum Jis Se Dar Rahe They Woh Nobat Bhi Aa Gaye

Dil Key Muamlat Gawahon Mein Bat GAye
Phir Do Dilon Ke Beech Adalat Bhi Aa Gaye

Jo Wajah-e-Dushmani They Teray Meray Darmian
Us Mein Kayee Dilon Ki Adawat Bhi Aa Gaye

Ik Ajnabi Diyar Mein Bey Saiban They Hum
Sir Per Ridaye-e-Shaam-Rafaqat Bhi Aa Gaye

Hathon Mein Is Ne Haath Dia Is Khaloos Se
Rag Rag Mein Jaan, Qalab Mein Himmat Bhi Aa Gaye

BUJH BUJH KER JHILMILANE LAGA TAAQ PER CHIRAAGH
SHAYAD TERAY BICHARNAY KI SAA-UT BHI AA GAYE !!!
[/QUOTE]

Sighz :-(

chand_chehra · March 23, 2003, 7:53am

very nice :k:

Azad · March 23, 2003, 4:07pm

Excellent Lamhay :k:

Man_de_Mouj · March 23, 2003, 6:11pm

Re: Shayad Teray Bicharnay ki !!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Nafrat Ki Zad Pe Apni Mohabbat Bhi Aa Gaye
Hum Jis Se Dar Rahe They Woh Nobat Bhi Aa Gaye

Dil Key Muamlat Gawahon Mein Bat GAye
Phir Do Dilon Ke Beech Adalat Bhi Aa Gaye

wow.......after a very long time, read an excellent, too classical piece of this poetry......your choice is real refined Lamhay........Thanks for sharing it..and do come up with stuff like this oftely....

Yes Dilsay..you are absolutely right in praising this ghazal....

ameen · March 23, 2003, 6:44pm

beautiful.

weteyes82 · March 23, 2003, 6:53pm

Re: Shayad Teray Bicharnay ki !!!

beautiful..! :k:
thnx 4 sharing

Dilsay · March 23, 2003, 7:10pm

Sookhay patoon par aklay chaltay jaab qadam paray
Mahsoos ya howa ka taray bechaarnay ka mousam hai aagiya

by Dilsay

system · March 23, 2003, 7:21pm

Beautiful, lovely :k::k:

Munir · June 12, 2003, 6:24pm

zabardast lamhay g main yahi poem post karnay wala tha kay forum per check kia tu ap post karchuki theen pehley

bohot zabardast poem hai per mising your peotries friend :( come back if possible....

Azad · June 13, 2003, 6:23am

humm