shayad kisi ne meri raat ka nazara nahi dekha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

reet February 16, 2008, 5:01am 1

hiiii there…

mukhra hasta hua kisi ne hamara nahin dekha,
woh lehar hoon jisne kabhi kinara nahin dekha,
milli mujhe sda tanhaiana aur gam,
koi deta kaise sahara ,kissi ne be-sahara nahin dekha,
gila ye nahin, ke mujhe sda gum mile,
gam yahi hain khushi ne palat kar dobara nahi dekha,
rehta hoon din mein khush, sabhii kehte hain khush naseeb hoon,
shayad kisi ne meri raat ka nazara nahi dekha,

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Shumaisa February 16, 2008, 5:17am 2

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V. Nice Reet.. :k:

redidentity February 16, 2008, 5:49am 3

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very nice..

welcome to Poetry section :)

muncho February 16, 2008, 6:52am 4

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gud 1 :)

muddii February 16, 2008, 7:45am 5

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Hmmmmmm nice choice:)

Zakhmi_Umar February 16, 2008, 8:24am 6

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rehta hoon din mein khush, sabhii kehte hain khush naseeb hoon,
shayad kisi ne meri raat ka nazara nahi dekha

Buhat khoob :k:

thanks for sharing

reet February 16, 2008, 11:10am 7

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thnku so much..........pasand karne ke liye aap sabhi ka bahot bahot shukria...........!

Aryaan February 17, 2008, 11:52pm 8

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Bohat hi khoob Reet..:k:

Daanie February 18, 2008, 5:42am 9

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buhut khoob :)

Koyal February 18, 2008, 11:25pm 10

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nice selectioN :)

reet February 19, 2008, 4:25am 11

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Aryaan, Daanie, Koyal............thnx to all of u......!

_Masoom_Muskaan February 19, 2008, 6:44am 12

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:k:

acha hoa nehe dekah wernah behosh ho jana tah
:AID:

reet February 20, 2008, 4:56am 13

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han g…shayad behosh ho hi jata…!

NikamiJano February 20, 2008, 1:28pm 14

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nice slection :)

being_lonely February 20, 2008, 2:41pm 15

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Nice choice :k: zamanay baad aap aur yahan ? kahan gum thay bhai ?

babri February 20, 2008, 3:33pm 16

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SID bhai yeh ice cream khane gay the.
PS very nice sharing.

Starlight February 20, 2008, 10:01pm 17

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Nice.

Jhanjharewali February 21, 2008, 12:46am 18

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Welcome BACK with such a nice sharing

reet February 21, 2008, 8:44am 19

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Thnx to everyone…!

thnx for remembering me…little bit busy with life…koshish karungi ki ab gum na hoon…!