Sharing my betukaa pun

[TLK]

Re: Sharing my betukaa pun

@TS

It’s not as explicit as:

Honton say choo lo tum [think cheek]
Maira geet amar kar do

It’s pretty good, TLK.

Oh yaar, there is nothing explicit in this ghazal. Last shair did not mean what Muqa and you are assuming. Azra Abbas kee shaeree parh parh ke aap dono ka zehen gandaa ho gayaa hai

@Monk

Boss you are so lucky you did not marry a panjabi girl.

She would said “aa keri — wasty likheea ??”

Lol, actually I have married a Punjabi girl, and she did ask that question

@prototype

o nahin @TLK bhai..acha bhala hai :k:

Jazakallah

@Laiha

aww not bad, TLK. I like the last couplet the most.

Tu mujhe laakh qasam de ke main bolon na kabhi
Band honton se bhi shikway tu main kar jaon ga

:k:

Thanks Laiha.

So no one liked the 'Zehen dareechay" wala shair. I thought that is the only somewhat decent shair (but glad to know that other shairs are also noteworthy)