~SHARE UR FAVOURITE ASHAAR~

being_lonely · April 4, 2006, 9:36pm

**vasl kaa din aur itanaa muKhtasar
din gine jaate the jis din ke liye **

Affaf · April 5, 2006, 11:25am

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Inhi KhushgumaniyooN main kaheen jaan say bhi na jaaooN
wo jo Charah-gar nahi hay usay zakham kiyoN dikhaoN

Affaf · April 5, 2006, 11:25am

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Ye JudaiyoN k rastay bari door tak gaye hain
Jo gaya wo phir na aya, meri baat maan Jao

deadsoul · April 5, 2006, 12:45pm

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tum bholna chaho to yeh haq hai tum ko
hamare baat aur hai hum nay to mohabbat ki hai

being_lonely · April 5, 2006, 5:18pm

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kitna paani bhar gya dekho gham ki baarish ka khwaab gaahon main
neend aaye to kis tarah aaye kaun sota hi aaab gaahon main

being_lonely · April 5, 2006, 5:19pm

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both are kool thx for sharing i hope u will continue!

deadsoul · April 5, 2006, 7:42pm

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pal bhar ko mil k ajr-e-shanasayi gaya
aik shakhs umer bhar ke tanhayi degaya

bichra to doste k asasay bhi butt gayay
shohrat wo legaya mujhay ruswayi degaya

being_lonely · April 6, 2006, 6:13am

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ye ek shab kii mulaaqaat bhii Ganiimat hai
kise hai kal kii Khabar tho.Dii duur saath chalo

being_lonely · April 6, 2006, 10:41pm

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qaasid ke aate aate Khat ik aur likh rakhuun
main jaantaa huun jo vo likhenge javaab mein :)

Zakhmi_Umar · April 8, 2006, 10:47am

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Mien hoo.n jis haal mien A meray sanam rehne de
Chaqoo mat de meray haath mien Qalam rehne de
mien Shayer hoo.n mera dil hai buhat nazuk
mien tu mar jao.n ga Patakhe se Bomb rehne de :)

grucini · April 10, 2006, 11:06am

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Ajab dastoor hay,aadab-e-rukhsal mafil ka
Voh bhi uth k chal dya,jiska koi ghar na tha

being_lonely · April 10, 2006, 11:51am

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*mere dil mein tu hi tu hai dil kii davaa kyaa karuun
dil bhii tuu hai jaan bhii tuu hai tujhape fidaa kyaa karuun *

Amal · April 10, 2006, 12:23pm

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A very nice collection in the making :k: …keep it up guys

being_lonely · April 11, 2006, 10:54am

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kaise sukuun paaon tujhe dekhnay ke baad
ab kyaa Gazal sunaaoun tujhe dekhane ke baad

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 11, 2006, 11:44am

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Ye zara zara sii baat par tarhaN tarhaN kay azaab kyuN
jo kisi say bhi khafa na ho mujhay us Khuda ki talaash hay
<O:pmujhay dekh kar jo ik nazar meray saray dard samajh sakay
jo is qadar ho chaara-gar mujhay us nigaah ki talaash hay

sara_farooqui · April 12, 2006, 3:57am

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Aisa na ho ke dard baney darde LAZAWAL
Aisa na ho ke tum bhi madawa na ker sakoo

being_lonely · April 12, 2006, 9:56am

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nice choice gul n sara 2 n welcome to GS poetry forum:)

being_lonely · April 12, 2006, 10:18am

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Gazal me.n bandish-e-alfaaz hii nahii.n sab kuchh
jigar kaa Khuun bhii kuchh chaahiye asar ke liye

X_Communist · April 12, 2006, 1:27pm

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Nice ones you guys.

Woh waqt bhi daykhain hain tareekh ki ghaRiyoN nay
Lamhon nay khata ki thi, sadiyon nay saza payee

Rukhsarbibi · April 12, 2006, 1:55pm

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very nice :)