share a shair & associated event

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ajazali July 24, 2012, 8:09am 1

From me:

aik dafa chacha ghalib apny kamray ki khirki main se bahir dekh rahay thay.
bahir aik tangay main aik haseen dosheeza baithi thi, ghalib ko shair ka pehla misra nazil huwa, aur keh dia

**Dil nikal kar seenay se maand e teer jata hai
**
ab dosheeza nai sun lea aur ghalib se kaha, apni umer dekho :p(sory to ghalib)
aur apnay batain dekho
tab ghailb ko doosra misra ye nazil huwa

**bohat roka bohat roka magr bamaa zangeer jata hai **
maand = ki tarah
bamaa = saath

muqawwee123 July 24, 2012, 8:28am 2

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kia dosheeza tanga chala rahi thi?

ajazali July 24, 2012, 8:42am 3

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tanga to pilot chalta hai, dosheeza pechay seat pe baith hui thi

ajazali July 24, 2012, 8:44am 4

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tanga ruka hoga na, aur musfir lainy k leay

muqawwee123 July 24, 2012, 8:44am 5

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Oh I see. Lagta hai Ghalib ke zamane main paron wale ghoRe hote the :p

ajazali July 24, 2012, 8:45am 6

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wo kaisay?

ajazali July 24, 2012, 8:52am 7

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acha pilot ki waja se keh rahay hain aap, :p, aap rikshon aur phateecharr buson pe driver k naam k sath pilot likha nai dekha hoga

jiia July 24, 2012, 9:25am 8

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mujyh aadhy shair yad hein unki event bilkul nahi

jese
jaate hain jis taange me school ko larkian
kion us kachwan ka taangah hua na me

muqawwee123 July 24, 2012, 9:27am 9

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kis chichoray aashiq ka shair hai ye. let me guess. Wasi Shah?

jiia July 24, 2012, 9:31am 10

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mujy bilkul yad nahi par kisiustad ka hy shayad
unhe radef qafia ka masla ho gaya tha
so unhon ne
kion us taange ka kochwan hua na mi jagah
kion us kochwan ka taaga hua na me hi set ker dia

ajazali July 24, 2012, 9:58am 11

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chichora kia, barra hi bad zauq qisam ka shayer huwa hai,
jo kochwaan bn'nay ki bajaye tanagah ban'ny ki soch raha hai,
ossay itna b nai pata k tangah aik pakage hai :p :D

muqawwee123 July 24, 2012, 10:01am 12

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salute guru ji

ajazali July 24, 2012, 10:04am 13

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cant digest

jiia July 24, 2012, 10:07am 14

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es se zahir hota hy shaer koe: ustaad :hein esi lai esei MOSHAGAFIAN nahi sujhen
unho ne radef qfia socha vo nahi jo aap ne imagine kai:halo:

ajazali July 24, 2012, 10:08am 15

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pakage means, tangaha = chakrra + ghorra
ab aik wqt main shayer ya to chakrra ban skta hai ya ghorra, lekn phir wohi bat shayer tha hi bad zauq :p

jiia July 24, 2012, 10:13am 16

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mujhy to over cleve lag raha hi

shaer dhunda jaey

ajazali July 24, 2012, 10:13am 17

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aik mehfil main ghalib se kisi nai aik misra kaha aur ooska doosra missra banany ko kaha,

pehlay missra ye hai,

**Naazuki oon k hathon ki kia keheay.....

**doosra aap guess karen

muqawwee123 July 24, 2012, 10:15am 18

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Mukka maar ke ek phul motiye ka maar gai

jiia July 24, 2012, 10:18am 19

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koe mujy chup karae:rotfl:

ajazali July 24, 2012, 10:18am 20

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:D