Sham Ke Baad. (Specially for Heart Hacker)

Black_Mamba · May 31, 2003, 6:32pm

Jab Kiya MaiN Ne Kabhi Khud Ko Nasha Sham Ke Baad
Teri AankhoN Se Liya Kaam Sada Sham Ke Baad

Hum Qafas Main Bhi HaiN Rehnay Ke Liye Ab Tayyar
Raas Aati NahiN Aazad Fiza Sham Ke Baad

Dard Dena Hi Jo Maqsood Ho, Beshak De Do
Par Kisi Ko Na Batana Ke Diya Sham Ke Baad

Mot Ko KyoN Na LagayeiN Ge Galay Ham Dilbar
Aaye Gar Mot Teri God MaiN Aur Sham Ke Baad

YooN To Har Waqt Tere Gham MeiN Maza Hai Laikin
Hai Gham-e-Yaar Ke Sehnay MeiN Maza Sham Ke Baad

Dil MaiN Meray Yahi Jaltay Huye Angaray HaiN
Chund ShairoN MeiN Kiye HaiN Jo BayaN Sham Ke Baad
Poet = (Black Mamba)

Dilsay · May 31, 2003, 6:34pm

Berautiful.... very beautiful...

maza aa giya isi tarha jawab hoona chahiya.... thanks

keep it up

ASA · May 31, 2003, 6:36pm

zabardast… :k: kya kehny…

**
jab bhe aatee hai teree yaad kabhe shaam ke baad
aur baR jaate hai afsurdaadile shaam ke baad

ab iraadoN pe bharosaa hai na taubaa pe yaqeeN
mujh ko le jaaye kahaaN tashnaalabe shaam ke baad

yuuN to har lamhaa teree yaad kaa bojhal guzaraa
dil ko mahasuus hue teree kame shaam ke baad

yuu.N to kuchh shaam se pahale bhe udaasee thee ‘Adeeb’
ab to kuchh aur baRee dil ke lage shaam ke baad
**

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 31, 2003, 6:43pm

zabur10 ap ne khud likhee hai?? its so nice :k::k::k:

thanks for sharing :k:

Black_Mamba · May 31, 2003, 7:51pm

Thanks to AsSweetAs and Dilsay

Thanks Heart Hacker

Yes Heart hacker. Khud Likhi hai
Aur aap ki Ghazal PaRhnay Ke Baad Hi Likhi Hai

baziger · May 31, 2003, 8:07pm

ufff oooo… kia batt hay :k:

Azad · May 31, 2003, 8:44pm

bohut khoob :k:

Golden_Scorpion · May 31, 2003, 8:55pm

For Black Mamba, Heart Hacker and AsSweetAs... Meri Koshish :D

**kaisay Keh duN ke tujhay Yaad Kia Sham Ke Baad
koi tou sham naheen aati hay uss sham ke baad

Uss ne baRh kar wo jo thama tha mera haath kabhie
Meri har saans maiN PinHaaN hay wo uss shaam Ke baad

Loag kehtay haiN ke wo Mera naheeN ho sakta
Kaisy karlOoN maiN YaqeeN iska ab usss shaam Ke baad

zabt mera kbhie tota hi naheen tha laikin
qoowat-e-Zabt fana hogai uss sham ke baad

kaisay Keh duN ke tujhay Yaad Kia Sham Ke Baad
koi tou sham naheen aati hay uss sham ke baad**
(Golden Scorpion)

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 1, 2003, 6:14pm

W:eek:W ap tu bohat achay shair hain :k::k:

Keep it up

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 1, 2003, 6:14pm

thnaks for sharin Golden jee

Keep it uo:k::k::k:

smilly · June 1, 2003, 8:33pm

wow bohet khoubb:k: :k:

BrokenSky · June 1, 2003, 8:49pm

Buhat Khoob:k:…
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Black_Mamba · June 1, 2003, 11:54pm

Thanks to
BrokenSky
Smilly
HeartHacker
Azad
Baazigar
and specially to Golden Scorpion for such a great poem
Great Ghazal Golden.
Keep it up :k:

_Nazish · June 2, 2003, 12:19am

Mot Ko KyoN Na LagayeiN Ge Galay Ham Dilbar
Aaye Gar Mot Teri God MaiN Aur Sham Ke Baad

wah…:k:

Galaxy · June 2, 2003, 3:03am

nice:k:

PKR · June 2, 2003, 4:25am

beautiful:k::k:

Black_Mamba · June 2, 2003, 1:19pm

Thanks Nazish, Galaxy and PKR

rabiaa · June 2, 2003, 3:37pm

Re: Sham Ke Baad. (Specially for Heart Hacker)

khud likhi hai??? wah rey…bohat achi hai :k:..really nice..

Golden_Scorpion · June 3, 2003, 9:52am

Shukria HeArT HaCKeR Gi

Golden_Scorpion · June 3, 2003, 9:54am

Thanx Alot Black Mamba Gi.. Aapki Suhbat Ka Nateeja hay