Main soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou…
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee
Re: ~Shakki Larki~
[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Mian soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou...
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee
[/QUOTE]
Wah Again you and your choice....Superb, zabardast
thanks for sharing
:k: pharma, u gotta neat choice in poetry na 
Re: ~Shakki Larki~
[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Mian soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou...
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee
[/QUOTE]
Buhat khoobsurat nazm hai magar shakkee larkee ko apne shak kahtam karne chahiyein :)
@ Man de Mouj... Thanks a lot ...thats a compliment for me
@ ** Seema**.... Thanks na :p
@ ** Capricorn**...hmm Shukriya
bhoot khoob :)
itnaa shuk kernaa achha nahi hotaa...aur kabhi kabhi ziyaada aitmaad bhi merwaa daitaa hai...kher, a nice contribution..parh k achha laga:)
niceeeeeeeeeee:k::k:
Waha waha.....
Re: ~Shakki Larki~
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Mian soochtee hoon
tayra mohabbat say paish aana
mayray gamoun pay udaas hona
mayree khushee main shareek hona
main rooth jaaoon, mujhay manana
mayree kitaboun main phool rakhna
mayray leeyay shair kehna
kaheen tayree aadatain hi na hoon
main shakee larkee tou aysee hoon k
kaheen bhi tayree mohabatoun main
kami hoe tou…
main tujh say shikwah kiye bina
tamam bandhan hi tour doun gi
koe waja naheen sounoo gee
Yeh shakki laRRki bahut mohabbat karnay waali hay:k:
dil-O-jaan say mohabbat karnaa bhee khuloos kee nishaani hay…
flower1:
Allah humm subb ko shakki banaaey 
Re: Re: ~Shakki Larki~
Re: ~Shakki Larki~
[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Mian soochtee hoon
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;)
abbay kiyaa har lafz kaa post martum karay gaa:hehe:
yaar: everyone of us actaully should describe the piece of poetry posted according to our understanding rather than just formal ‘nice, bahut khoob, zabar10:k:’ qism kay reply.. hay naa? what do u think?
Sahee kaha, hamein appreciate karne ke liye apne words use karne chahiyein farakhdilee se magar pata hai yahan agar kuch likho to koi appreciation naheen miltee. This is poetry section na to yahan par log ghalat matalb bhee nikaal lete :roleyes:
Rahee baat post martum kanre kee to woh to mein karoonga, Capricorn jo thehra 
jhot nehe bolte :nono: meree post pe to serf anghoota bana dete ho 
:Dlolz… iss ko signature nahiN karna aatay hongey naa;) angoothay say kaam chalaataa hay:p
kahin “ThennGaa” tau nahiN dikhaataa:hehe:?
Tum se mein darta hoon na isee liye jaldee mein jaan chura kar bhagta hoon, tum takhreeb kaar ho 
lol,
MasooM Takhreeb Kaar:smokin2:
:soch soch kar zameen par lout pout honay wala icon:hehe::
mugh se derne ke koe zaruret nehe Allah se derein 
yei takhreeb kaar kia hota hei 
me to masoom se hoon
gadha bhae ap kyon lotpot ho rehe hein :o
yaar yeh itna maartee hai ke bas, mein bhee bachee samajh kar maaf kar deta hoon