Shair

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Jaagti aankhon main neend bhar de koi
Koi mujhe mujh se ab aazaad karay

Muddat se hain jaag rahi aankhen tumhari
Aa’o ab inn main neend bhar doon main
Gehri weeraan aankhen na bhaayen mujhko
Aao kaajal se apna naam in main likh du main**

By: Pari

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Re: Shair

waah, bahot Khoob…agar apnii aawaaz meN bhii paRhtii to aur bhii lutf aa jaataa…Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyaada! :slight_smile:

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Re: Shair

:eek:

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Re: Shair

lol kya hua hai?

ps: KKF, sharminda mat kiya karo, yaar. Bohut ziada cheeni ho jaati hai app ki taareef main.

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Re: Shair

**Jaagti aankhon main neend bhar de koi
Koi mujhe mujh se ab aazaad karay

:biggthumb:**

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Re: Shair

lol…yeh aapkaa Khayaal hai. jo likhaa maiN ne vo meraa Khayaal tha…let’s walk our lines! :slight_smile: hai na? :stuck_out_tongue:

to, apnii aawaaz meN kab record kar rahii haiN? :slight_smile:

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Re: Shair

wah pari ji wah :k:

nice khayal… poori ghazal honi chahiye.. ab jab aap jaise log poetry main aa gae hain to ek muqable shayari hona chahiye

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Re: Shair

Khan Sb Vs. Pari :hmmm:

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Re: Shair

Thanks, par main itni qaabil bhi nahi hon ke app jaise seasoned shayar se panga lon.

I am still just testing the water.

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Re: Shair

seasoned shayar :cb: kon?

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Re: Shair

KKF. Aur kaun? :cb:

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Re: Shair

lol…mujhe aapke haathoN shaa’irii meN piTne kaa koii shauq nahiiN! :smiley:

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Re: Shair

madz124 this was beautiful.