shair

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 14, 2011, 9:28pm

mere hamsafar ka ye hukm tha ke kalam us say main kam karoon
mere hont aisy sily ke phir meri chup nay usko rula dia…!

Shab-e-Hijar · May 14, 2011, 9:51pm

Re: shair

us ko rula dia ya tum ko :?

jiia · May 15, 2011, 12:35am

Re: shair

vese apko bhi ak ption osi dene chaheay thi

AAP IJAZAT TO DEN TAKKUM KI

VO GUFTAGO KIA JO BA ASAR NA HUE

Aryaan · May 15, 2011, 1:15am

Re: shair

Nice One Muskaan..:k:

Amarbail · May 15, 2011, 7:42am

Re: shair

Bahut khoob …:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · May 15, 2011, 11:49am

Re: shair

Nice :-)

ehsan · May 15, 2011, 2:24pm

Re: shair

Nice

khud bhi bagga aur dosron koh bhi bagga.

Miyan_jee · May 15, 2011, 4:12pm

Re: shair

Boht khoob!

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 17, 2011, 12:50pm

Re: shair

mujhe kia pata shaair se ask karo

ijazat hai :d

thankoo bhai

thanks bhai

thanks gul

jab tak ap ban nai karain ge me ne yehi karna hai

thankoo bhai

jiia · May 17, 2011, 1:41pm

Re: shair

te feer TABAHI q nahi machai

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 17, 2011, 2:32pm

Re: shair

kia kaha cant understand

KKF · May 17, 2011, 2:41pm

Re: shair

**is she'r ko yuN kaho taa k tumhaare "ro-une" mizaaj kii 'akkaasii kar sake :D

miraa, hamsafar ko, ye Hukm thaa k kalam mujh se vo kam kare
lab-e-uu kuchh aise sile k phir mujhe uskii chup ne rula diyaa**

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 17, 2011, 3:20pm

Re: shair

hamsafar kahan se laon