shair o shairi

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Good luck :slight_smile:

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**wow! great thread…aapne to sunaayaa nahiiN koii she’r…maiN ne ek she’r sunaa diyaa :slight_smile:

meraa she’r kidhar gayaa? rassi toRaa kar bhaag gayaa? :cb:
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vo she’r to mujh se Dar kar bhaag gayaa…ab ise laayaa huN pakaR kar…ise hii dekh leN :cb:

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Thanks
hahaha lagta hai bechara bhag gaya thaa :stuck_out_tongue:

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wah wah wah janab kia khoob shair ha … zabardast :k:

Please more .

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**thankoo so much Na’man and MKD…****haN na…Dar ke mujh se dum dabaa kar bhaag gayaa…Darpok kahiiN kaa :cb:

wow…zabardast…maiN samjhaa thaa k aapne ek she’r kaa kahaa thaa…ab andaaza huaa k aap ek Ghazal yaa ek nazam kii baat kar rahii haiN to Theek hai maiN insha Allah ek nazam abhii aapko sunaataa huN…ok?

ek nazam bachchoN ke liye:

bachche kii du’aa by 'allamah Iqbal:**

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It's ok ghazal, nazam ya shair suna sakte hain koi restriction nahin hai :)

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**
ok mem saab :slight_smile: thankoo for clarification :slight_smile: to ab maiN deevaan hii le kar kiuN na baiTh jaauuN hahaha :hehe:**

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bohot hi acha idea hia..

to issi idea ki hosla afzaiee keh liye.. hamari taraf say aik shair pesh-e-khidmat ho.. :)

poora suniya gaa.. :)

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Re: shair o shairi

very nice esp the second one :p

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Re: shair o shairi

ji thanku thanku.. :blush:

aahista aahista aur pesh hongay.. :slight_smile:

aab bhi kuch peeshiyey :slight_smile:

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waah janaab, waah...aapne is she'r o shaa'irii kaa ruKh urdu shaa'irii kii duusrii sinf kii taraf moR diyaa ya'nii mazaaHiya shaa'irii ya'nii Hazal-goyii kii taraf. meri taraF se meraa hii ek mazaaHiya she'r pesh-e-Khidmat hai, mulaaHizah farmaaiye: