well its kind a fil’badeeh game or show ur poetry skills too
main yahan apna ik missra likhoon gee next member us ko apnay alfaz say mukammal keray .ga or aglay member kay ley apna ik missra choray ga or phir ise terah agla member us ko mukmal keray or agay walay kay ley misra day ga
ok here i go
GEr hussan hay Mayaar to kion Chaand hay akyla
Re: Shair mukamal kerain !
:k:
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Ger hussan hay Mayar to kion chaand hay akayla
Aam haiN Dastyaab, aur detaY ho mujh ko Keylaa:bailan:
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looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool at Anwaar Qureshi…
PS: Ham aamoun kay shehr Multan mein rehtay hain.
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AQ> * smack* * samck * smack samck
app mujhay say Amon ke payte lay loo per mera shair ko sabaze mande mut banaoo
N wnere is next misra ?
game agay bhi to chalana hay
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AamoN kaa shehr Meer Pur Khas/SindhRi hai jahaaN saY hum haiN 
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Gar Hus'n hai maYaar tau kiouN ChaaNd hai Akaila
PhirtaY haiN Meer khuaar aur Farhaad hai Akaila :D
Iss BaY Aab-O-GeYah sehra maiN kaun phir rahaa hai
kaun har dum pukaar raha hai: Lailaa!! Lailaa !
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^ wow bohat khoob
Iss BaY Aab-O-GeYah sehra maiN kaun phir rahaa hai
kaun har dum pukaar raha hai: Lailaa!! Lailaa
hoye gumshuda woh muhabtain jub hotay thay chaak garyban
ab to bas hay khuwahishion ka Raila or Zindgee ka Maila
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main yahan apna ik missra likhoon gee next member us ko apnay alfaz say mukammal keray .ga or aglay member kay ley apna ik missra choray ga or phir ise terah agla member us ko mukmal keray or agay walay kay ley misra day ga
ok here i go
GEr hussan hay Mayaar to kion Chaand hay akyla
i think,
GER HUSSAN HAI MAYAAR TO KION CHAND HAI AKYLA
*HAI CHARON TARAF JAB KAY SITARON KA BHI MAILLA:) *
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GER HUSSAN HAI MAYAAR TO KION CHAND HAI AKYLA
Hai Husann ikk miyyar tabhi chand hai Akyla
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ahh guys sirf isee misray ko complete nahi kerna tha is ko to anwar qureshi ker chukay ab agay continue kerain
** hoye gumshuda woh muhabtain jub hotay thay chaak garyban
ab to bas hay khuwahishion ka Raila or Zindgee ka Maila**
ab is ko agay chalaana hay !
ps>
** rabia > nice misra keep it up**
*Assweetas> oh man ajj say ik saal pehlay mujhay bilkul yehe same misra kissi nay is shair per batya tha jo app nay likha ..is itfaqq per main bohat hayran hoon ..ik ik lafz or us ki terteeb wohee hay *
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Multan mein dono cheezain hi payi jati hain. Bahaud-din Zakariya aur Shah Shams kay mazar bhi yahan hi hain. Log nangay paaon atay hain hamaray shehr mein. Have a loot at my location. I have written in the city of saints.
Yahan aam bhi boht wafar hotay hai masha Allah.
Nahi, Multan kay aamon ki keya baat hai. Taqreeban 20 qisam kay aam hotay hain yahan.
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Boht ala. Khoobsoorat.:k:
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taref k layaq hai
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Fikar ki koi baat nahin, agar khaanay ke liye hai kaila…
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^duniya main or bhi ghum hain khaanay kay siwa : P
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dunia mai or bhi gham hain khaanay k siwa
kam or bhi hain garmi mai,nahaanay k siwa:D
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multam OLIYA KARAM KA BHI TU SHEHAR HAy
