Shab-e-tanhaai meiN sitaaroN ka libaada orrhey

Amal · March 6, 2002, 2:17pm

**Shab-e-tanhaai meiN sitaaroN ka libaada orrhey
teri yaadoN ke jugnuN sey chamakney lagtey heiN
aur dil pe cha jaata hey khud-farebi ka aesa aalam
ke har taraf teri hi aamad ka samaaN hota hey
jesey kisi aavaaz ke dhokey meiN koi murr kar dekhey
jesey sehra meiN saraaboN ka gumaaN hota hey

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By: Amal
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

NikamiJano · March 6, 2002, 3:42pm

Beautiful Amallike always
and it’s true Shairi such bolti hai

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Amal · March 7, 2002, 12:28pm

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Pramod · March 7, 2002, 12:47pm

Nicely said, Amal. Well done...

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Capricorn · March 7, 2002, 12:51pm

Beautiful.

Rameesha · March 7, 2002, 4:59pm

buhat achhey ....

chand_chehra · March 8, 2002, 12:06am

veryyyyyyyy nice amal

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Perfectionist · March 8, 2002, 9:14am

Nice

Dharkan · March 8, 2002, 12:57pm

Wow…simply beautiful n’ impressive as always

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NIKAMIJANO..i agree wid u,no doubt shairee such bolthee hey coz poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings,it takes its origin from emotions recollected in tranquility.
btw Amal dont

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umm aissa tho hotha hey aissay kamoo’n mein

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ASA · March 9, 2002, 10:03am

Bouhat khoob Amal

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Koi to ho jo mere wehshatooN ka saathe ho

NikamiJano · March 10, 2002, 2:14am

Amalshaeri itna be such nahi bolti k ap

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Amal · March 10, 2002, 1:36pm

Nikami ji afsos huwa aap ki baat sun kar …

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… Itni shaeri parrhney ke baad bhi aap ko abhi tak andaaza hi nahi huwa ke shaeri kitna sach bol sakti hey?

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

NikamiJano · March 10, 2002, 1:49pm

Amal Saheeb
ab afsoos k uper afsoos kia karna k ap ne sirf tamheed he bandh de baat tu ap ki samj main phir be na aiey soo

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

system · March 12, 2002, 7:11am

I love your poetry. It is so beautiful!

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Aap nazam likhen ya ghazal, aap ka jawaab nahin.

Amal · March 12, 2002, 1:04pm

My pleasure

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…thanx very much

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

najia · March 12, 2002, 2:28pm

its really nice amal. and i i am strongly agree with u.
shairi hamesha saach bolti hai balke yeah to wo zarya hai jis se hum wo baat bhi keh jate hain jo amm lafzoun mein bayan nahi hosakti
right!

shakeeb apne taaruf ke liya bas itna kafi hai
hum un se baach ke chalte hain jo raste aamm hojaein!

Amal · March 12, 2002, 5:16pm

Thanx najia

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…