Kabhi daikha hai ik nazar shaam k baad
Kitnay chup chap say lagtay hain shajar shaam k baad
Tu hai suraj tujhay kahan maloom raat k dukh
Tu kisi rooz meray ghar mein utar shaam k baad…
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Thanx!
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itnay chup chaap k rastay bhi rahaingay laa ilm
chor jayengay kisi roz nagar shaam k baad
laut aye na kisi roz wo awara mizaaj
khol rakhtay hain issi aas pay dar shaam k baad
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^^ nice addition
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Nice :k:
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its lovely
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nice :k:
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awsome :k:
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Nice one Asma & Deadsoul
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Thanx a lot for appreciating.
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adding some here
Unmol bey-naam saraab bhena chatha hey
Tedbeer soojhi - Koe fasla na rahey, herr shikayet keye baad?
Tum kahan keye ho liye, chup...
Jeb sawal utha, aik adhoorey jawab keye baad?
Afsos, aik gheira khwab ka menzer cha gia tha,
Zindagi ko kareeb sey dekhneye keye baad
Bohet deire si howee chathee hey, ager semjho tum tow,
Koe unjaneye meye bhee, towr nahee sekta wada, dil ki kahi baat keye baad
Deg maga jo raha tha, wohh tha nashai shaid
Apni mheroomiyoon ko mijhey sogaat deye janeye keye baad
Dekho, jin mey tha kutch arsa pheleye chemkta aks tumhara,
Aaj hey chashm-geer noor inhi ankhoon keye baad
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extremely true to life.
thanks for sharing these nice poetic lines.
Kabhi daikha hai ik nazar shaam k baad Kitnay chup chap say lagtay hain shajar shaam k baad
Tu hai suraj tujhay kahan maloom raat k dukh Tu kisi rooz meray ghar mein utar shaam k baad....
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Thanx dushwari for this nice addition. I really liked it.
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app sab great ho yaarrroooooooo. thx all of you.
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nice sharing :)