Shaam thee bheegi bheegi see
PairoN per udaasi Chaai see
Yaas dareechay Khulnay lagay
Tabbiyat phir kamlaai see
Khud say koi Rooth gaya
Haan! zabt ka pallu Choot gaya
Chupa rakhaa tha sub say jisay
Woh Aankh ka sitara Toot gaya
Falak bhi zoroN ronay laga
Har shai ko Zameen ki dhoonay laga
Ujla Ujla, Nikhra Nikhra
Teri yaad ka saaya honay laga
Re: Shaam!
Shaaam always inspired me a lot ..... thanks for sharing such a cool poem
Re: Shaam!
Nice one!! :)
Re: Shaam!
bohat khooob maham g!nice 1
Re: Shaam!
lovely poem
Re: Shaam!
Thank you,,, Sannan, Gul, HH, Dani & Ehsass
Re: Shaam!
dhund chaye hoi hai jheeloon par
urr rahay hain parinday teeloon par
sab ka rukh hai nashaimanoon ke taraf
basityoon ke taraf, banoon kee taraf
apnay gul'loon ko lay kar charwahay
sarhadi bastiyoon mein jaa pohanchay
dil e nakaam ! mein kahaan jaoon ?
ajnabi shaam ! mein kahaan jaoon ?
Re: Shaam!
simply, well writ. :>
keep it up, Maham
your poems are true of us women and our sensitivity.
dushi
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simply, well writ. :>
keep it up, Maham
your poems are true of us women and our sensitivity.
dushi
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Thanx a lot Dushi