shaam

maheen_sajid · July 30, 2003, 8:29pm

shaam ke ujalon per
apnay narm hathon se
koi baat achee si
koi khwab sacha sa
koi bolti khushbu
koi soachta lamha
jab bhi likhna chaaho gay
soach ke dareechon se
yaad ke hawalon se
mera naam chup chup ker
tumko yaad aaye ga
haath kanp jaein gay
shaam thehar jaeigi
mera naam chup chup ker
tum ko yaad aaey ga…

Swera · July 30, 2003, 9:44pm

Bohat khoob,

Daagh · July 30, 2003, 10:07pm

nice one maheen :k:

P.S. aapke signature mein kya hum hai

system · July 30, 2003, 10:18pm

:k:

maheen_sajid · July 31, 2003, 5:05am

thanx

cuteAmir · July 31, 2003, 5:27am

Re: shaam

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by maheen sajid: *
shaam ke ujalon per
apnay narm hathon se
koi baat achee si
koi khwab sacha sa
koi bolti khushbu
koi soachta lamha

boht khoob.
i like this one.

BeWaQooF · July 31, 2003, 6:06am

Simply Best :k:

Hawkeye · July 31, 2003, 6:18am

Re: shaam

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by maheen sajid: *

haath kanp jaein gay
shaam thehar jaeigi
mera naam chup chup ker
tum ko yaad aaey ga................
[/QUOTE]

Wah ... buhat khoob, simple yet effective ...

maheen_sajid · July 31, 2003, 10:18am

thanx again

Capricorn · August 1, 2003, 7:01am

As always, beautiful :k:

chodhry · August 1, 2003, 7:18am

bohat khoob maheen. aaap bohat acha likhti ho.

maheen_sajid · August 1, 2003, 5:57pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *
bohat khoob maheen. aaap bohat acha likhti ho.
[/QUOTE]

thanx

maheen_sajid · August 1, 2003, 5:59pm

shukria