Shaam ke baad...............

Ek_Shairah · April 10, 2002, 7:34pm

Tu ne dekha hai kabhi ek nazar shaam ke baad
Kitne chup chaap se lagte hai shajar shaam ke baad

Itne chup chaap keh raastey bhi rahein ge La-ilm
Chor jaaen ge kisi roz tera Nagar shaam ke baad

Mein ne aise hi gunaah teri judaai mein kiye hain
Jaise toofan mein koi chor de ghar shaam ke baad

Who shaam se pehle mast apni urhaanon mein tha
Jis ke haath mein thay tootay hoye par shaam ke baad

Too suraj hai tujhe kya maaloom raat ka dukh
Tu kisi roz utar mere ghar shaam ke baad

Laut aye na kisi roz woh aawara mazaj
Khol rakhte hein isi aas par dar shaam ke baad

Farhat Abbas Shah

Mahee · April 10, 2002, 8:14pm

very nice shairah g. wesay aeci 2 ghazals han. dono farhat abbas shah ki han or dono hi bohat khobsuret han. u posted 1st one here.

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

chand_chehra · April 10, 2002, 10:42pm

bohaaaat hi khoooob

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

jaanaan · April 11, 2002, 3:43am

Khalil haider has sung it on one of his album. very nicely done.

jaanaan · April 11, 2002, 3:46am

the name of that album is ..i forgot man.. i will get it and post it here

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Maheen2002 · April 11, 2002, 9:24am

Too suraj hai tujhe kya maaloom raat ka dukh
Tu kisi roz utar mere ghar shaam ke baad

Bohot khoob...

-------Maria-------
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

Ek_Shairah · April 11, 2002, 4:16pm

Thanx Mahee

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Can u plz post the 2nd one…Thanx

Ek_Shairah · April 11, 2002, 4:23pm

Thnx chand_chehra and Maheen2002 for liking

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Oh really!

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I haven’t heard it, I just have this ghazal in my dairy.
Thanx for telling me & i m waiting for Album name

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Dhoop · April 11, 2002, 5:49pm

its beautiful
one of my all time favourites

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“shaam tak qaid raha kertay hain dil kay under
dard ho jaatay hain saray hi riha shaam kay baad
chaand jub ro kay sitaron say galay milta hai
aik ajab rung ki hoti hai fiza shaam kay baad
hum nay tanhaee say poocha kay milo gi kub tak
uss nay baichainee say foran hi kaha shaam kay baad
lout aatee hai mairee shab ki ibadat khali
jaanay kis arsh pay rehta hai khuda shaam kay baad”

phew there r still more shairs to this
and all of them r beautiful…

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choice ES ji…

Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

Ek_Shairah · April 11, 2002, 6:10pm

So nice of you Dhoop ji

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& thanx for liking my choice

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m_isabah · April 11, 2002, 6:52pm

.. this is one of the classics .. i only had a couple of shairs from it .. and now I have the complete version ..

**Mai.n ne dekhaa diivaano.n ko shaam ke baad
Dhuu.NDh rahe the viiraano.n ko shaam ke baad

Taariikii phir saare aib chhupaa legii
Le aanaa ghar mahamaano.n ko shaam ke baad

Mai.n ne us kaa sog manayaa kuchh aisaa
Khaalii rakhaa paimaano.n ko shaam ke baad

Yaad kare jab mujh ko terii tanhaa_ii
Dekhaa karanaa gul_daano.n ko shaam ke baad

“Farhat” chaa.Nd ke Khauf se kar letaa huu.N band
Kamare ke raushan_daano.n ko shaam ke baad**

.. thank you ..

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To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour

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Shaam-e-Firaq · April 11, 2002, 7:05pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Ek Shairah:
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Itne chup chaap keh raastey bhi rahein ge La-ilm
Chor jaaen ge kisi roz tera Nagar shaam ke baad

Mein ne aise hi gunaah teri judaai mein kiye hain
Jaise toofan mein koi chor de ghar shaam ke baad

Farhat Abbas Shah**
[/quote]

BEAUTIFUL POETRY ALL TIME MY FAV. THX FOR SHARING ES Jii.....

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jab bhi Aati hai teri yaad kabhi shaam ke baad
aur barh jaati hai afsurdaa-dili shaam ke baad

ab iradon pe bharosa hai na tauba pe yakeen
mujh ko le jae kahan tashnaa-labii shaam ke baad

yoon to har lamha teri yaad kaa bojhal guzara
dil ko mahsoos hui teri kami shaam ke baad

yoon to kuch shaam se pahele bhi udaasi thi
ab to kuch aur barhi dil ki lagi shaam ke baad
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"If you belong to Allah, rest assured that Allah will indeed belong to you"
"Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today"
"The best way to cheer yourself up is to try to cheer somebody else up."
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Dhoop · April 12, 2002, 3:07am

“ab iradon pe bharosa hai na tauba pe yakeen
mujh ko le jae kahan tashnaa-labii shaam ke baad”

kiya zaalim shair hai Allah ki qasam…
kiya baat hai

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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

Rameesha · April 12, 2002, 3:09pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Ek Shairah:
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Too suraj hai tujhe kya maaloom raat ka dukh
Tu kisi roz utar mere ghar shaam ke baad

Farhat Abbas Shah**
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ES jee thanks for sharing one of my favourites by Farhat A. S. .. but correct shair is ...

Tuu to suraj he tujhey maloom kahaN raat ka dukh
Tuu kissi rooz mery ghar meiN utar sham key baad

Rameesha · April 12, 2002, 3:13pm

waqei zalim shair he Dhoop jee… thanks for sharing S-e-F jee …

Ek_Shairah · April 12, 2002, 4:58pm

Thanx m_isabah for liking & sharing another ghazal with us

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Ek_Shairah · April 12, 2002, 5:08pm

Thanx Sham-e-Firaq for liking it, It’s really very beautiful ghazal.

This is simply very nice

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Jagjit & Chitra singh sung it in a very nice way…

It’s just so beautiful

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Thanx for sharing

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Ek_Shairah · April 12, 2002, 5:18pm

Thanx 4 liking & correcting

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Azam_1 · April 16, 2002, 7:08am

Nice piece of poetry

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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.

speed_master · April 16, 2002, 3:33pm

Buhat Khoob.

Shaam ke baad...............

“ab iradon pe bharosa hai na tauba pe yakeen mujh ko le jae kahan tashnaa-labii shaam ke baad”

“ab iradon pe bharosa hai na tauba pe yakeen
mujh ko le jae kahan tashnaa-labii shaam ke baad”