Shaam K Baad

rabiaa · June 18, 2004, 7:12pm

ahem ahem ..hello shello logoon…hum hamesha soochte they k yahan kuch post karien..per kabhi kia nahi..per aaj than kar aye thi k is section ki bhi shoba badha hi dein ..so ere i am..blush…aur jo ghazal mein post kar rahi hoon bohat sundar hai,:teary:..sab wah wah karna ..snooty..

tu ahem ahem…

Tu ne dekha hai kabhi eik nazar shaam k baad
Kitne chup chaap se lagte hain yeh shajar shaam k baad

Itne chup chaap k raste bhi rahein gay la-ilm
Chod jayein gay kissi roz nagar shaam k baad

Mein ne aise hi gunaah teri judaai mein kiye
Jaise tofan mein koi chod de ghur shaam k baad

Shaam se pehle woh mast apni udanon mein raha
Jis k hathon mein they toote howey par shaam k baad

Raat beeti tu ginney aablay aur phir soocha
Kaun tha Ba-issay aghaaz-e-safr shaam k baad

Tu hai suraj tujhe maloom kahan raat ka dukh
Tu kissi roz mere ghur mein utar shaam k baad (wah wah wah )

Laut aye na kissi roz woh awara mizaj
khol rakhte hain issi aas pey dar shaam k baad

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HeArT_HaCKeR · June 18, 2004, 7:16pm

bus yaheen kamii thee tumharii

veryy nice ghazal mae waisay post ker chukii hon yahan

rabiaa · June 18, 2004, 7:18pm

haan na achey logon ki kami tu har jaga hi hoti hai…..

kyun post ki thi tum ne..tumhey koi aur kaam nahi mila tha karne ko ..koi nahi ki thi..sab log woh wali bhool jao yeh padho....

Daagh · June 18, 2004, 7:21pm

wah wah wah wah

:halo:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 18, 2004, 7:23pm

arayy jaouu.. mae ne ye -ve sense mein kaha tha.. stupid ppl :o

ye mera sec hai aur mae jo marzii post keroon tumhien kia:hoonh: ayeen barii:p

shoaib_akhter · June 18, 2004, 7:26pm

nice but boring :k:

HAMMAD · June 18, 2004, 7:26pm

sham kay baad may soota hoon
sorry
hnhhhhhhhahahahahaahahahah

rabiaa · June 18, 2004, 7:36pm

Mr Bongay thanx vanx…..ankhein zyada hi asman per nahi chedna shoro ho gayeen..hoonh

Bewafa tum negative sense ko tu choro.tum pehle yeh batao tum mein sense aye kab …halo..howa kab yeh hadsa…
aur haan Badi tu hoon mein..aur aa bhi gaye hoon…tu sahi kaha Badi aye..yeh Welcome shelcome karne ka naya style hai :halo:

Munneyyy Boringggg??? eek…yeh boring lagti hai tumhey?>…chch budzook log…..

CHunneyyy ufffffffff yeh poosti shakal yahan bhi ata hai……meri thread mein tum yeh fazool jamayaan nahi lo gay acha ..

HAMMAD · June 18, 2004, 8:18pm

acha

Amarbail · June 18, 2004, 8:25pm

I must say its a great choice and a nice way to start …:k::k::k:
Welcome to the Poetry Section and hope you will share more …

rabiaa · June 18, 2004, 8:30pm

hai na na..shabash..kitna sach bolte hain aap…:rotato:..:k:..

thanx vanx…i definetely will share some more…chinta nako karne ka..

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system · June 18, 2004, 9:36pm

wah wah bohat khoob.. :rotato: parh ker roona aa gaya

thanks for sharing

Zakhmi_Umar · June 19, 2004, 5:36am

Re: Shaam K Baad

all time favorite :k:

very nice thanx for sharing

Shaam k baad aur subah say pehlay

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 19, 2004, 8:01am

dafa duur.. mujh mien tum se ziada senses mujood hian:snooty:

Zakhmi_Umar · June 19, 2004, 8:11am

hmm i think this thread will increase poetry section’s shobha :k:

WWE

Koyal · June 19, 2004, 12:10pm

v nice raboooo...:)

Maheen2002 · June 19, 2004, 1:02pm

ab idher bhi tapak parri ho tum

waise ahem ahmm…kis ki yaad mei itni udaas ghazal likhi hai?? :halo:

hai zabardast especially ye part:

**Tu hai suraj tujhe maloom kahan raat ka dukh
Tu kissi roz mere ghur mein utar shaam k baad

Laut aye na kissi roz woh awara mizaj
khol rakhte hain issi aas pey dar shaam k baad**

:k:

cuteepie · June 19, 2004, 2:32pm

very nice :k:

ASA · June 19, 2004, 4:49pm

khoob… :k:

Seedha_Saada · June 19, 2004, 7:41pm

very nice rabiaa :k: